ladyloves! - a f/f comment ficathon

Jun 23, 2012 11:00

I have been wanting to do this for awhile, so, LET'S.

ladyloves!

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perfectlystill June 25 2012, 21:22:25 UTC
pretty little liars, emily/hanna, do you still keep pictures of old girlfriends (1/2)

(i'm actually not even halfway through season two yet, so if any of this is glaringly wrong in terms of what has happened in canon up to this point i apologize!)

They graduate tomorrow and instead of a quiet night at Spencer's eating popcorn and watching lame but cute romantic comedies Hanna has dragged them all to a party. Boys are playing pool in the next room, the cues hitting the balls and the balls bumping together, the sounds coming scattered and fading, mixing with the thump of the bass and people's feet on the hardwood, swaying and grinding together another room over. Everything is too loud, the streamers hanging down the ceiling and the Congratulations Graduate balloons seem too bright and obvious ( ... )

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perfectlystill June 25 2012, 21:23:54 UTC
do you still keep pictures of old girlfriends (2/2)

"Get in. We have memories to make." Hanna pushes on the small of Emily's back and Emily complies, sliding over as Hanna gets in after her and closes the curtain. "Do you have quarters?"

Shaking her head, Emily finally lets herself smile, reaching into her bag and fishing for some change. "You know, the first time I kissed Maya we were in a photobooth."

"Oh," Hanna says. "Em, I'm so sorry. I, I forgot. If you don't want to-"

"No, It's- it's okay." She pulls a few quarters from her purse and gives them to Hanna, dropping them into Hanna's palm one by one, counting, 25, 50 , 75, a dollar. "We didn't have to pay then ( ... )

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fandomnerd June 26 2012, 00:13:53 UTC
Oh my god I am in love with this. It's so ridiculously hard to find good fic about these two. So just...Thank you for writing this.

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cassiehayes June 26 2012, 01:24:35 UTC
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! i am so thrilled you wrote this, oh my god, and i so love how you write these girls. the tension about A that is always, always there, so very present even at big normal high school moments like this, and how they just want to put it out of their mind is perfect. and then there hand-tugging and photobooth kisses and ugh, i love how emily has thought about it before - Emily would be lying if she said she's never thought about kissing Hanna before, and she's tired of lying, i can't even deal with how much i love that line, and then everything she's wondered about hanna feels so spot-on, like i just picture this so well. this is really giving me all the feelings about these two, and you've written them with such an insanely lovely chemistry. happily sighing over and over. ♥

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weekendsinner July 8 2012, 12:04:20 UTC
Loved the kiss! And their little interaction afterwards:

Sometimes I like girls.
Me too.
You like girls more than sometimes. Yeah. More than sometimes.

Great work!

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