IDK if this is anything like what you wanted...but here you go :) True Love - Karen/Holly - The UnpureSince that day in the kitchen, when her tear stained lips touched the small chapped girl lips of her paramour, it was like everything else around the girl was a blur, and for Holly, there then existed only her
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Omg someone wrote it! Sorry it took me a little to notice, I didn't have notifications for this post + had forgotten to check.
I liked this! I really liked the exploration of Holly's guilt and conflicting emotion, because it's something I think we didn't see quite enough of in the episode due to it being so short. So I liked that you explored a bit of that here, how she feels guilty for what she's doing and knows that as an authority figure for Karen she should resist but can't. I also liked the detail about how she's tired of forbidden relationships, since her previous relationship was with a married man; it's a detail I hadn't really noticed or thought about when I watched the show but I think it's a good one.
I'm just glad someone prompted it XD i didnt was this ship to be forgotten due to the one off drama concept of the show, I really did like them. Anyway, i'm really happy you liked the fic! The thing with Holly and relationships is I feel like the character in a way tries to set herself up for failure? idk, i think thats why her managing to stay with Karen at the end is so important. She mentions in the ep that she's going to have to leave because of the affair, like she's prepared herself for leaving Karen and not staying with her. I think them being together at the end kind of shows a willingness to try and just let things be. The way she cant control the class i think she uses that as an excuse not to be the one in control of her relationships, but her leaving that at the end allows her to get over that and become stronger.
Sorry, i rambled abit there but oh well. Again, glad for the prompt and your reply :)
True Love - Karen/Holly - The UnpureSince that day in the kitchen, when her tear stained lips touched the small chapped girl lips of her paramour, it was like everything else around the girl was a blur, and for Holly, there then existed only her ( ... )
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I liked this! I really liked the exploration of Holly's guilt and conflicting emotion, because it's something I think we didn't see quite enough of in the episode due to it being so short. So I liked that you explored a bit of that here, how she feels guilty for what she's doing and knows that as an authority figure for Karen she should resist but can't. I also liked the detail about how she's tired of forbidden relationships, since her previous relationship was with a married man; it's a detail I hadn't really noticed or thought about when I watched the show but I think it's a good one.
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Anyway, i'm really happy you liked the fic!
The thing with Holly and relationships is I feel like the character in a way tries to set herself up for failure? idk, i think thats why her managing to stay with Karen at the end is so important. She mentions in the ep that she's going to have to leave because of the affair, like she's prepared herself for leaving Karen and not staying with her. I think them being together at the end kind of shows a willingness to try and just let things be. The way she cant control the class i think she uses that as an excuse not to be the one in control of her relationships, but her leaving that at the end allows her to get over that and become stronger.
Sorry, i rambled abit there but oh well. Again, glad for the prompt and your reply :)
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