you're a wolf, boy, get out of this town (sorry this is ridic & someone else should totally fill it!)
Cato says, "Moon's bright."
Clove tilts her face up towards it, doesn't bother to rub her eyes or yawn. "It'll be full soon." Her teeth are sharp and white, eyelashes almost black in the silver light. "You ready?"
He almost says, I didn't think we would ever run together again. They didn't expect Twelve girl to last this long. Didn't expect any of them, really
( ... )
Wolves are designed to survive; children are more delicate things.
I just love how your writing is always filled with these sharp, gorgeous lines that are absolutely cutting, and this one totally stood out to me. Plus: I love what you've done with this AU, "The Capitol doesn't like the wolves." IT MAKES SO MUCH SENSE.
ok, first of all, i don't know anything about hunger games. second of all, LOVED THIS. i just LOVE your sentences and their rhythm and the words you use and everything.
favorite parts:
He always thought, freedom is a luxury we can't afford, but instead of saying it ran his fingers through the scruff at the base of her neck, a beautiful dusky dark brown, murmured, "I'll keep you safe."
and
Except:
There is a small dark wolf, all sharp green eyes and sharper white teeth.
He stares at her and growls her name - Clove - which is a scent, which is as close as he has ever come to love.
She dips her head to his throat and blinks, three times,
ok, first of all, i don't know anything about hunger games. second of all, LOVED THIS. i just LOVE your sentences and their rhythm and the words you use and everything.
favorite parts:
He always thought, freedom is a luxury we can't afford, but instead of saying it ran his fingers through the scruff at the base of her neck, a beautiful dusky dark brown, murmured, "I'll keep you safe."
and
Except:
There is a small dark wolf, all sharp green eyes and sharper white teeth.
He stares at her and growls her name - Clove - which is a scent, which is as close as he has ever come to love.
She dips her head to his throat and blinks, three times,
(sorry this is ridic & someone else should totally fill it!)
Cato says, "Moon's bright."
Clove tilts her face up towards it, doesn't bother to rub her eyes or yawn. "It'll be full soon." Her teeth are sharp and white, eyelashes almost black in the silver light. "You ready?"
He almost says, I didn't think we would ever run together again. They didn't expect Twelve girl to last this long. Didn't expect any of them, really ( ... )
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I just love how your writing is always filled with these sharp, gorgeous lines that are absolutely cutting, and this one totally stood out to me. Plus: I love what you've done with this AU, "The Capitol doesn't like the wolves." IT MAKES SO MUCH SENSE.
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second of all, LOVED THIS. i just LOVE your sentences and their rhythm and the words you use and everything.
favorite parts:
He always thought, freedom is a luxury we can't afford, but instead of saying it ran his fingers through the scruff at the base of her neck, a beautiful dusky dark brown, murmured, "I'll keep you safe."
and
Except:
There is a small dark wolf, all sharp green eyes and sharper white teeth.
He stares at her and growls her name - Clove - which is a scent, which is as close as he has ever come to love.
She dips her head to his throat and blinks, three times,
and rips it out.
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second of all, LOVED THIS. i just LOVE your sentences and their rhythm and the words you use and everything.
favorite parts:
He always thought, freedom is a luxury we can't afford, but instead of saying it ran his fingers through the scruff at the base of her neck, a beautiful dusky dark brown, murmured, "I'll keep you safe."
and
Except:
There is a small dark wolf, all sharp green eyes and sharper white teeth.
He stares at her and growls her name - Clove - which is a scent, which is as close as he has ever come to love.
She dips her head to his throat and blinks, three times,
and rips it out.
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"She dips her head to his throat and blinks, three times,
and rips it out."
Perfect way to end it.
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