Alternative Baking 101 (and Advanced Emotional Concealment) [Jeff/Annie, Part 1/2]

Mar 27, 2015 10:38

Between rewatching season three and being very excited about the existence of season six, I got a little overwhelmed by my own Jeff/Annie emotions -- ergo my first Community fic in a long, long while!

Alternative Baking 101 (and Advanced Emotional Concealment) - Community ; Jeff/Annie ; 2,000 words ; Part 1 of 2. In which Annie grapples with ( Read more... )

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cgkm2099z March 27 2015, 20:10:03 UTC
When I get overwhelmed by my own Jeff/Annie emotions, I too, often end up with unresolved sexual cupcakes.

I really like this! Looking forward to part 2 :-)

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wallows March 27 2015, 20:34:12 UTC
So, sooooo good. Better than Jeff's victorious gluten free cupcakes. It has been too long since we got fic from you. Voices are dead on.

Like fingers do, when one person takes something from another person. LOL

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firthgal March 27 2015, 21:00:47 UTC
AAAAAAAH, SO GOOD SO GOOD SO GOOD! Loving this immensely. Pining Jeff is the greatest Jeff of all. Gah, that moment when he was so ready to kiss her and wondering if she was thinking the same thing and then she just pats his shoulder, SO GOOD. Jeff noticing Annie ignoring him and Britta a little too carefully was a lovely little detail. Frankie assuming that they have late night orgies on a regular basis was hilarious. Jeff's Annie-shaped tumor in his heart! I loved how he just couldn't take the disappointment in her eyes, even when he's not the one who caused it. HE LOOOOOVES HER! So much goodness in this fic. My favorite bit of dialogue:

“We have to be the change we want to see in the world,” she says earnestly.

“And far be it from me to argue with that bumper sticker,” Jeff says, “but why, exactly, do you want to see a world where cupcakes taste less like fluffy cakey goodness and more like drowning slowly in quicksand throat-first?”

Looking forward to part 2!

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drunkencarp March 27 2015, 22:49:11 UTC
I suppose this is where I should have left my message about this being good and the characterization being strong.

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theafterimages March 28 2015, 01:38:28 UTC
This is so cute! Your character voices, as always, are perfect. I can't wait for part 2!

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