It Happens, Chapter Four

Jun 08, 2009 16:37

Title: It Happens, Chapter Four
Author: domfangirl
Starring: Paul Kellerman and Sara Scofield
Category: Multi-chapter
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Where there’s sparks, there could be fire, you know.
Author’s Notes: I just had a thought. No disrespect to Michael’s memory, it’s been six years by the timeline I use. Sara is only human. This story picks up with the ( Read more... )

prison break, paul/sara

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ovariesofsteel June 9 2009, 00:12:48 UTC
Fabulous. Absolutely fabulous! Look forward to the epilogue as Sara insisted on no condom sex. Should be interesting. Can't wait to read it!

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badboy_fangirl June 9 2009, 19:05:16 UTC
Don't get too excited, Sara is also on birth control. The no condom thing was more to illustrate power than it was to illustrate babies.

Maybe, someday...

I think the epilogue will still be satisfying, though!

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wrldpossibility June 9 2009, 05:45:23 UTC
Just wanted to let you know I have this saved. Now that I'm working on my own WIP with Sara post-finale, I want to wait to read the rest after I'm all done, even though the plots are so different. I find it helps to do that!

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badboy_fangirl June 9 2009, 18:56:21 UTC
I only want people to read if they want to read! Don't feel obligated! No worries.

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wrldpossibility June 9 2009, 19:02:15 UTC
Oh I do want to. I just need to enter into my own with an empty head, so to speak. lol

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melanyebaggins June 9 2009, 05:53:39 UTC
I was dubious about this fic when I first read the premise, but damn, girl! This is awesome :D Quite believable too, you write them both well ^_^

Now, can I put the idea in your head for a post-series Sara/Linc fic? One that doesn't include Sofia in any way? ;)

*whistles innocently*

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badboy_fangirl June 9 2009, 18:55:23 UTC
The last chapter of this will be Linc and Sara, as in-laws, which I know is less than satisfying for all the L/S shippers out there (myself included) but...well, I've really written them as much as I think I can.

Did you have a specific plot bunny to give me? I can't promise anything, but I really feel like I exhausted the Linc/Sara genre for myself, and I really feel like this is my last contribution to the PB fandom.

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melanyebaggins June 9 2009, 20:39:05 UTC
awwwwe it's a sad sad day when domfangirl stops writing L/S *pouts* I had been hoping for an L/S fic similar to this one actually, though now you have us all abuzz with teh Kman :P Mayyybe a sort of...continuation/epilogue to 'and then michael happened', or did you not write that one? I tend to forget authors of fics I've read so long ago lol!

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badboy_fangirl June 9 2009, 20:55:39 UTC
I did write TMH (with gatheringlight) but I've written many Linc/Sara stories, you know right? I only wrote two short pieces where Michael was actually dead (long before he really died), one where they were happy together, and one where they were not, but I wrote multi-chapter beasts back in the day about L/S. That's mostly why I feel like I've already done it. If you want to read those, and think you haven't already, I'll link you up. I definitely thought about L/S when Michael died, but since I'd already written them a few different times, I wanted something new, I guess, hence Paul/Sara. *g*

My instant reaction to continuing TMH is that if Michael died in that universe I don't know if Linc and Sara would automatically get back together. It would be strange, I think, given the givens. Hmmm. I'll think about it, though.

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rosie_spleen June 9 2009, 11:41:05 UTC
Yeah. Like it a lot. The whole sex scene dominance was very in character and something I really liked about these two in Season 2. Oh, and he is smitten. I can just imagine those eyelashes battering about and that chest hair a-fluffing in some of those descriptions above.

You've done a great job making this believable, Candy, especially considering the canon ending of Michael and that many readers can't entertain the idea of anyone else.

I also like the idea of Sara warming to him as being more of a permanent fixture, and the softening effect it has on Paul:

"Yes... Even I have a family. I didn't just spawn from an evil empire.

Oh? You sure? *g*

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badboy_fangirl June 9 2009, 19:03:19 UTC
I loved the idea of him knowing there was never going to be anything--one--else for him, and for her to be less than certain, but definitely wanting to see what could happen.

I also liked her being in control, without having to be on top of him. He does lurve her, doesn't he? *pets him*

The final chapter is just going to be from Sara's POV, and of course, Lincoln will be there because I've surrendered to the idea of this being my last PB hurrah and knowing I couldn't end it properly without my best character...;-)

Nice icon. Smack pie!

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heliokleia June 9 2009, 13:19:15 UTC
"...I can't. Get. Enough.”
Sara's arms wound around his neck, pulling him into her even though he was trying to keep distance between them. “That's how it's supposed to be,” she whispered."
- Mmhh... right, and our greedily coupling couple isn't the only one here, getting not enough, tehe...^^
*grins hugely*

YAY for continuing, my dear, I was more than delighted discovering that you've written a 4th part of my fave het PB pairing
- and still one more to come, + an epilogue where Linc's involved?
- Can't wait, my dear, can't wait!^^
*does lil happy dance*

And I love that Sara mentioned 'all these little things' like Unca Linc, telling her (in his ...awkward way^^) how a lil boy should pee in the right way, LOL!^^
*nods**nods*
Also I do love that Sara decited no more condoms, heehee, good girl!^^
*licks lips*

So I'm really excited and looking forward for your next great installment of KMAN/SARA, my dear,
thank you very much for posting this one, it was delicious and a real, real pleasure to read!^^


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badboy_fangirl June 9 2009, 18:59:33 UTC
Sara is still on birth control herself, so I think she just thinks double bagging isn't necessary....

I'm glad this has been so enjoyable for you. It has been fun to write for sure.

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