Title: It Happens, Chapter Five
Author:
domfangirl Starring: Sara Scofield, Lincoln Burrows and Michael Scofield Junior
Category: Multi-chapter
Rating: PG
Summary: Where there's sparks, there could be fire, you know.
Author's Notes: I just had a thought. No disrespect to Michael's memory, it's been six years by the timeline I use. Sara is only human.
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I love that there was a level of familiarity for you as a reader seeing Linc and Sara together. Because they are family, and her concern was real, as well as her underestimation of Lincoln. I loved that more than anything, that he got it, and she didn't need to justify herself.
I also like Paul just trying so hard--with Mikey and with Sara, because he finally has something in his life worth the effort.
And it was very easy to write little Mikey, because he is so much like his father. I really, really liked that, and would actually have liked more of it, strangely enough!
I'm glad you liked it so much and that it was emotionally satisfying for you. Thank you for all your thoughts!
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I didn't comment on the previous parts but I still wanted to say that this...
Michael-big Michael-could be quite a snotty know-it-all
... made me grin madly. I like Michael but you couldn't be more right about this side of his character *g*
"Hey," he said, a puzzled frown wrinking his brow. "Is Uncle Linc your boyfriend now?"
Aww, Michael Jr. is a Lincoln/Sara shipper! *clears off*
Last but not least, I loved the conversation between Sara and Lincoln. I have a soft spot for them being friends or acting brotherly/sisterly so obviously, this was just perfect.
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I think Mikey would have been fine with Uncle Linc/Mom too, so I threw that in there for fun. *g*
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Brilliant solution, congrats!^^
*nods**nods*
"Nothing can change how I feel about you, babe. You're my brother's wife, and my nephew's mother. You can't do anything to get rid of me, you got it?"
-WOW! Now I'm really impressed. This is miles away from the Linc I've had known, and believe me, my dear, I still held my breath for a moment as the truth slid out of Sara's lips...
Ah, I'm so glad about the happy ending and still though, Paul was not there in persona, thankx to your choice of words, it looks like he was...
So, thank you very much for this last installment of your PB centric stories, my dear, you made me happy and smile in contentness and it was a real, real pleasure to read.
♥
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And so then Lincoln wants to know for sure, because he loves Sara and he wants her to be happy, and then she says everything she says, and he knows, and it's bittersweet because everyone knew this day had to come, but it's still sad because it's just another reminder that Michael is dead, and he's not coming back.
And Paul and Mikey playing X-box has got to be entertaining as hell. *g*
Thanks for all the reading, Leah. *hugs*
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