Coincidence or Not BB/DM NC-17

[domhobbitzes]

Title: Coincidence or Not
Author: domhobbitzes
Pairing: Monaboyd
Rating: NC-17
Summary: It’s purely coincidental... well, maybe not.
Warning: Future!fic This story takes place in the future after Lost has run its course and LoTR is way over.
Author’s note: For shirasade for Christmas. Merry Christmas, sweetie! *nuzzleloves*

Comments

so painful

[slashfairy]

so scary.
shuffle
cut future/past present. cut merry/billy/pippin/dom clothes/hair/skin/cocks. cut accident/intent/coincidence.
cut the cards, and lay them out
and read the hand

"He ran into Dominic out of the blue in some random place and from then on, well, he supposes the rest is history? But why now? Why here? Why like this? Billy could’ve sworn it was all coincidental but, well, now he’s just not sure."

shuffle. cut, deal.

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Re: so painful

[domhobbitzes]

So true, so true. Thank you for reading. :)

[framianne]

Very hot, and sweet at the same time.
The flashbacks were perfect...

"It's purely coincidental when Dominic's hand brushes his own as Billy reaches out for some object, any random object, and the younger man just happens to do the same at that exact moment in time. The touch sends a jolt through Billy's body, just like it used to years ago (...)"

This I absolutely loved...I know the sensation so well... :)

More...maybe? :)

[domhobbitzes]

Hehe. I wanted the flashbacks to be the only truly sexual part of the fic because I wanted people to see how they have changed since then, how they have grown up.

Thank you for reading it. I'm glad you liked it. :)

There seems to be some interest in there being more but... I just don't know what to write... unless you have some ideas? ;)

[krystalshay]

Great structure, I love reliving-memory stories. Thank you for posting this, a lovely thing to find on monaboyd this morning!

[domhobbitzes]

Aww, thank you! I think structure was really important in this one and I'm glad I changed it from my original idea. :)

You're welcome. Everyone needs a little monaboyd in the morning. A great way to wake up. ;)

[krystalshay]

Wake up, go to sleep, spend your lunch hour...

[domhobbitzes]

Hehe. Good point. ;)

[zahz87]

That was fantastic, the structure was great and it was so very powerful. Great morning read.

[domhobbitzes]

Thank you! Good to hear you liked it, especially the structure and... well... message. ;)

Thank you.

[sacreddesire]

God I love you. It's been awhile since I've read good smut, and this certainly makes up for it. Thanx! :D

[domhobbitzes]

Haha. Well, you're welcome. ;)

I'm glad you enjoyed it.