Inspiration hit this evening, and the last two or three pages of chapter 28 ("Deification") more or less wrote themselves! The finished chapter is now posted for your perusal
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I would absolutely love to see a TRD drabble. Maybe something about how Cole and/or Phoebe are dealing with her pregnancy. Or anything else you want, I just love to read your writing!
He lay beside her at night, a protective arm slung over her shoulders, and dreaded the next demonic attack. The wards weren’t impenetrable (her duty could still invade), and the tiny life inside her (only twice glimpsed, but already fiercely loved) would be vulnerable to the dangers of combat
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Wow! That was awesome! You are a wonderful wonderful writer. Please don't ever stop writing. You are just way too good. Plus I know that I would not be the only person who would be severely depressed.
yay!!! you finally updated!!! i've got to say this chapter was eagerly anticipated and i was going to hurt you if you didn't update soon!!! anyway it was a great chapter as always!!! and as for the drabble!!! i'd really like one about when they got back together!!! like when Phoebe had the premonition and how they both felt about it!!! thank you and i hope you update soon!!!
Thanks so much for your comment on Retrospection! There'll be Chris/Cole interaction in the next chapter, but for now, have a missing moment from Chapter 28--the two of them in the nursery.
The elf vanished in a huff, and Chris watched as Cole picked up Wyatt, cradling him like-
Well, like any man with a baby nephew, gently and with an affectionate half-smile.
What was he now, that he was accepted as one of the family? Human? Demonic hybrid? Something else altogether?
“You weren’t expecting me to be here,” Cole said matter-of-factly. “Or for Phoebe to be married, or pregnant.”
It was a statement-he wouldn’t be telling him anything he didn’t already know-so he nodded. “Something changed. I don’t know what, how or why, but it brought you here.” Pausing in his pacing, he admitted, “You and the baby are variables I didn’t-”
“My family isn’t an equation you can screw with.” There was a knife-sharp, dangerous edge in Cole’s voice. “And if anything-anything-happens to them because of you
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omg!!! i totally love that drabble!!! your writing is so amazing!!! and you just seem to be able to capture the characters really well!!! i'm so jealous!!! and again thank you!!!
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The elf vanished in a huff, and Chris watched as Cole picked up Wyatt, cradling him like-
Well, like any man with a baby nephew, gently and with an affectionate half-smile.
What was he now, that he was accepted as one of the family? Human? Demonic hybrid? Something else altogether?
“You weren’t expecting me to be here,” Cole said matter-of-factly. “Or for Phoebe to be married, or pregnant.”
It was a statement-he wouldn’t be telling him anything he didn’t already know-so he nodded. “Something changed. I don’t know what, how or why, but it brought you here.” Pausing in his pacing, he admitted, “You and the baby are variables I didn’t-”
“My family isn’t an equation you can screw with.” There was a knife-sharp, dangerous edge in Cole’s voice. “And if anything-anything-happens to them because of you ( ... )
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