Scared Sightless, 6/?, [PG13] Dean, Sam & Bobby

Jun 18, 2009 00:55

Title: Scared Sightless

Disclaimer: If I owned I probably wouldn’t have so much time on my hands…

Warnings/spoilers: To be safe I’ll say the first three seasons but major spoilers for season 3 specifically 3x15, Time is on My Side.

Word Count: 3,347

Summary: Dean’s timing is everything, one second later and things can go much differently. Time is on my ( Read more... )

scared sightless, supernatural fanfiction

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yaya_wr8t3r June 18 2009, 16:06:30 UTC
Nice to see you back at writing this :) I was hoping to see how things unfold! Ooooooh that Bella X(
Keep it up ;)

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dontknowmyname June 19 2009, 03:10:50 UTC
Thank you sooo much! Yeah I've had quite the break lol but I think I'm back. It means so much that you reviewed and are enjoying it! Thanks again!

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gidgetgal9 June 18 2009, 17:32:30 UTC
Oh I so look forward to the next chapter girl- this is so wonderful! :0)

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dontknowmyname June 19 2009, 03:09:55 UTC
Hehe thank you! You're going to make my head swell with all your nice comments! I've got half of chapter 7 done so far and I really like it. I'm typically really critical of my own work lol so hopefully that means this is actually good haha.

A few people over on FF.net have reviewed and asked me to keep Sam blind when Dean goes to hell. I honestly wasn't planning on it lol but now I'm toying with the idea? It of course would end up being a sequel but it's kind of an interesting way to go I think. I know one reviewer in particular sent me a PM asking me to keep him blind because she would love to see how that changes the way Sam lives while Deans in hell. I'm rambling again lol and I'm not sure you care either way but I do have a love for suggestions, they get my creative side rolling lol. I'd love to hear what you think or if you have a preference on what you'd like to read next! Thanks soooo much. Sorry for writing so much lol.

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gidgetgal9 June 19 2009, 16:41:14 UTC
Comments for the readers are always great especially if you haven't totally mapped out which way you're going with a story. I'm anal about my stories- I only start posting once I have the story finished so suggestions don't always help me out - though Dream Weaver was not finished so on that one it was cool to hear the comments about what I could do. So now I'm rambling ( ... )

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sendintheklowns June 18 2009, 23:25:10 UTC
I wasn't expecting Bela -- great twist!

I'm pretty sure Sam is heartbroken at the thought that he lost the magic charm. *sigh* I guess lying, even for a good cause, never turns out well.

Great stuff here, kiddo!

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dontknowmyname June 19 2009, 03:03:08 UTC
So glad you liked it!! I'm really pleased how this chapter turned out and what I have so far for chapter 7 I kinda love lol. Thanks so much for commenting!

I just need to make up my mind if I want to heal Sam or not lol. I got a few reviews on ff.net asking me to keep Sam blind once Dean goes to hell because they want to see how that changes Sam's time without Dean. I must admit it's tempting haha but I'm just not sure. I guess if you have an opinion I'd LOVE to hear it cause suggestions always help get my mind rolling =).

Thanks again!

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sendintheklowns June 19 2009, 03:07:10 UTC
I'm kind of a glass half full kind of gal when it comes to Sam so I have to say I wouldn't be adverse to him remaining blind. Gidget, however, will probably poll the other way :)

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dontknowmyname June 19 2009, 03:13:23 UTC
Hahaha I just asked her too so I'll have to see. You two will be like the angel and devil on my shoulder(not going to say which is who lol).

Thanks for that though. I'm going to have to give it some thought cause I'm hoping to wrap this story up in a few more chapters. Definitely some more limp and hurt Sam in the next chapter! I'm finding out that I really do kinda of really love hurting that boy or man lol.

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screamoutloud June 22 2009, 21:02:28 UTC
Awesome fic!

Lookind forward to the next chapter!

xxx

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dontknowmyname June 23 2009, 12:54:39 UTC
Thank you! So glad you liked it! =)

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dawnintheforest June 23 2009, 05:06:41 UTC
What a cliffhanger way to end this chapter! Don't rush this story, it's too good so far for that. I've just read all 6 chapters, and I'm really looking forward to following this story to its end. Even if it will probably make me want to cry.

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dontknowmyname June 23 2009, 12:54:07 UTC
Awe thank you so much! That was one of the nicest reviews I've ever received and I'm so glad you liked it! Chapter 7 will be up soon, I promise! Thanks again! =)

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dawnintheforest June 24 2009, 05:54:22 UTC
You're welcome. And yay, I will look forward to chapter 7!

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