Homecoming, 1/1, [PG13] Dean & Sam

[dontknowmyname]

Title: Homecoming

Disclaimer: I don't own the characters but my Writing Fiction teacher doesn't know that so lets keep it hush hush, okay?

Word Count: 4,211

Warnings/spoilers: This is an AU story with minor spoilers for the Pilot.

A/N: I am taking a Writing Fiction course this semester and we had to write a short story. Of course, being a

Comments

[sendintheklowns]

I enjoyed this every bit as much on that read through as my earlier one. And Dean joining the Marines seems much more plausible then, oh, say, Dean being in jail which would be another place that would take him away from his family.

My favorite part was at the end when Dean is home and the brothers are bonding. Wonderful work!

[dontknowmyname]

Awe thank you sooo much! I'm so glad you liked it and thank you for all the help you gave me. I'm so nervous to have it worked shopped but I'm hoping the class isn't too harsh. One of the girls in my class grew up in a Marine family and she's reading it over to let me know how off I was with the years but I'm hoping I'm not way off. I don't want anyone to call me out on that haha.

The ending is my favorite part so I'm glad that is was yours too!

Thanks again! I'm going to send you the third chapter for Claudia's story if that's okay with you. I have to read it over but I'm so excited to get into the really good part! =)

[pageavenue57]

I liked it, different but I liked it for teenchester lol

[dontknowmyname]

Awe thanks for the comment, brah! I'm glad you liked it. Definitely nervous to have the class work shop it but hopefully they wont be so mean. Thanks again =). <333 LOVE YA!