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My Only
May 03, 2012 07:07
Title: My Only
Rating: PG
Genre: Romance
Length: Oneshot or Drabbled?
Pairing: YunJae
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They broke the hug and started entwined their fingers while walked to inside the station. Their face looked so content. So beautiful.
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mrsvictory
May 5 2012, 15:21:26 UTC
Read it! ^^
Actually, I do like this fluffy fic of yours. I can say you've improved a bit tho. I mean, the way the plot run is quite good than before.
Please be careful on the point of view and some simple grammar okay?
You did a good job! Fighting ^^
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Actually, I do like this fluffy fic of yours. I can say you've improved a bit tho. I mean, the way the plot run is quite good than before.
Please be careful on the point of view and some simple grammar okay?
You did a good job! Fighting ^^
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