jamais deux sans trois 4/?

[doobb]

Title: jamais deux sans trois 4/?
Pairing: jongin/baekhyun
Genre: romance
Rating: pg-13
Summary: jongin didn't plan on being a father so soon, nor did baekhyun plan on enrolling as a permanent babysitter, but that's life, things never go the way you want them to.
Disclaimer: I just own the story, none of the boys.
a/n: I'm so sorry it took so long

Comments

[anryo4]

I'm really enjoying this!!! Jongin is interesting, and I'm still rather curious about Baekhyun's past. Your writing is great and I'm really excited to read the next chapter!

My only critique is your grammar for dialogue. Instead of a period ending the sentence, it should be a comma inside the quotation marks, and then the next word outside of the quotation marks should be in lowercase (unless it's a proper noun).

For example:

“Hm,” He answers -----> "Hmm," he answers.

“Something happened?!” He says a bit too loud... -----> "Something happened?!" he says a bit too loud...

“I found her.” He just says. -----> "I found her," he just says.

Hope that helps! Keep up the good work!

[hibinoasako]

omggg are you going to continue this bcs baekai lkshjdflkjd and this story is pure gold *____*

[naenaeun]

Hey! :D I'm get really stressed reading a lot in English (because I'm a Spanish speaker), but, gosh, I really love your story, I read it all in a day and now I want more, I really want more.
KaiBaek is my ultimate otp and have they in this kind of story makes me cry of feels ಥ_ಥ
I hope you can continue this soon and I also hope that you haven't left it, I'll wait for the next chapter, doesn't matter how long it will be :(( (I hope soon)
btw, I like everything! sorry if my english isn't good enough, hope see you soon :)