Comments | dorianslover: Fic: Ce Silence (Fred Bousquet/Eric Shanteau; NC-17; 1/1)

dorianslover

Fic: Ce Silence (Fred Bousquet/Eric Shanteau; NC-17; 1/1)

Jan 19, 2010 19:55

Eric groaned and collapsed back onto his dorm room bed, rubbing his eyes. He glanced over to where a digital clock sat on his desk and let out a sigh. This was his third night in a row to stay up until at least 2 o'clock AM and it was beginning to wear on him. He turned his face towards the ceiling and let out a breath before pushing himself back ( Read more... )

rps, fic: ce silence, pairing: fred bousquet/eric shanteau, rating: nc-17

Comments 8

navy_brat_1972 January 20 2010, 02:34:01 UTC

J'ai aimé cette histoire. Descriptions admirablement écrites et telles merveilleuses. Vous avez un modèle d'écriture magnifique et je lirai certainement cette histoire à plusieurs reprises et encore.

Seriously. I did love this story. It was beautifully written and your descriptions were lovely. Thanks for posting...

dorianslover January 20 2010, 02:36:23 UTC

Merci beacoup, madam! :D

navy_brat_1972 January 20 2010, 02:40:13 UTC

Vous êtes le plus bienvenu!!!

Bien que, il ait étiré mon cerveau pour traduire le français. Je n'ai pas été à l'aise en années ! Je peux lire et encore comprendre lui… mais seulement!

caly_queen January 21 2010, 04:15:00 UTC

1. Merde! I meant that in a good way
2. I wish I spoke french more fluently so I could write this comment in french. Apparently learning for 8 years isn't enough to be fluent. :S
3. I love this story. I love how it was written. And I love the fact that you interspersed french throughout the whole story effortlessly. It made it more true to the fact that it involved Fred, and that he would be more inclined to speak in french then in english.
4. This is OT, if I had a hot Frenchmen teaching me french, I would probably be more fluent. :P

dorianslover January 21 2010, 04:44:08 UTC

I took French for three years and I called it my Defense Against The Dark Arts class because I had a different teacher every year; everyone kept leaving! It was annoying.

That was... three years ago? *counts* I'm a sophomore in college... didn't take it my senior year... so yeah. 3 years. So I haven't have French in a while... writing this was an absolute bitch. The anatomy was easy; the rest of it was hard. I broke out the English/French dictionary; no lie.

Glad you enjoyed it! Merci Boucoup! :D

myriadolust January 21 2010, 07:16:02 UTC

See? Who says reading smut can't be educational. ;-P

This was awesome. :)

dorianslover January 22 2010, 00:38:52 UTC

Merci beaucoup! :D

caly_queen January 21 2010, 16:01:28 UTC

I had the DADA situation for my grade 11 math class. We changed so many times. (I don't think we had an Umbridge though...)
I had to take french because it was compulsory (Canadian, enough said.) , but I stopped after grade 9. (I'm sophomore in Uni. now) This is why I'm not so fluent. Anyways...
I hope you do something like this again. With this particular pairing.
It would be so cool. :)