[Fanfiction][Honey & Clover] On Coffee and Cigarettes

[lalagirl208]

title: On Coffee and Cigarettes
series: Honey & Clover
pairing: Mayama X Rika
notes: Hi, this is long overdue, but here’s the Mayama/Rika I promised to some anon quite a while ago. I honestly don’t quite get their relationship much~ XD But meh~ It was worth a try. ^_^ I tried to make it simple, because that’s what H&C is all about: simplicity -

Comments

[lirin_lirafulae]

I admired this very much - the script was almost magical. I love subtelty in all its forms, and I was entranced on how you managed to tie up coffee and love. It wasn't abrupt, although it was short, but that shortness was all it took for the drabble to be wonderfully poetic.
I wished I could write like that. T.T An astounding job well done!

[lalagirl208]

Thank you very much~ ♥ I'm glad you liked it. Mayama/Rika isn't my H&C OTP so I was really nervous about writing it. And, and you addressed an issue I had with the length of this fic. XD I agonized over how short it was when I finished writing it but I really couldn't find anything else to add to it. x.x I'm glad the length did not make it.. well.. XD ugly. XD Because I was really afraid that it did. lol. XD Thanks~ ^_^

[indira14]

This was so beautiful~ I loved how drabble-ish it was. What I mean to say is it was precise and focused - like a drabble is supposed to be in order to make an impact - and leaves a lasting impression in so few words. I love your writing style, seriously. And I do agree with your AN - Hachimitsu is all about simplicity. This drabble was a simple glimpse into Mayama's thoughts - and, you know what they say. Simplicity is beauty. :D

[lalagirl208]

Thank youu~ ♥

I'm really glad you liked it. XD I'm really glad the length didn't ruin it too. Short fics/drabbles leave me feeling guilty for some reason. x.x

Man, all this H&C is making me want to rewatch the whole thing. I wish the mangaka would make another spin off ♥.