Memories Of Our Summers AS/S

Jul 10, 2008 16:41

Prompt(s): Sunblock/ tanning lotion, Summer job, Copious amounts of alcohol, Lemonade, Tree house, lyrics from Cruel Summer by Bananarama, Confession (Special bonus prompt)
Title: Memories Of Our Summers
Author: Dorothy Gale
Beta: Toto. Any remaining mistakes are my own.
Length: 3711 words
Rating: R for language and dark themes.
Summary: What ( Read more... )

as/s fic, angst

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Comments 21

jem46 July 11 2008, 02:49:30 UTC
I loved this. A bit sad at the end but it still won my heart. I would have liked to known Draco response to this. I'm very happy-sad at the moment and its wonderful! And that is probably the worse sentence ever.

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dorothy_in_oz July 11 2008, 08:49:10 UTC
Maybe next week you'll see how Draco sees all this - his point of view. See? You shouldn't suggest me anything! It's going to be a long follow-up next week...

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aldehyde July 11 2008, 16:18:31 UTC
;(

i kept suspecting it might be draco but when you mentioned how BOTH ginny and harry didn't like scorpius, and how harry had forbidden him from visiting the potter household, i started getting really worried.

this was very well-written, and i especially liked how harry's insanity [it must be craziness!] was due to his own personal demons and the ghosts still haunting him.

poor boys :(

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dorothy_in_oz July 14 2008, 07:06:53 UTC
Thank you very much for this amazing comment! It made my day!

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abusing_sarcasm July 12 2008, 17:48:50 UTC
AHHHHHH!

I knew, KNEW, that when Shauna and I decided to do this (and I swore to read every fic) that someone was going to do this to me!!! You totally made me cry!

Mean lady!!!!!!!

But this was beautiful! Incredible work...

*hugs*

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dorothy_in_oz July 14 2008, 07:08:03 UTC
I made you cry? The almighty mod? *is proud of herself*

You see, it was meant to be sad and all that jazz. It came from the bottom of my heart too, exactly what I thought when I read the prompts...

*hugs back*

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abusing_sarcasm July 14 2008, 07:13:34 UTC
Lol! I'm a huge pansy, I swear... But that was totally amazing! For once I didn't mind getting all weepy... :D

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dorothy_in_oz July 15 2008, 07:33:43 UTC
*snickers* I don't think you're a pansy. Let's say I know how to trigger some reaction in my readers...

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thilia July 14 2008, 15:02:07 UTC
Oo

Wow. This was intense. Poor Scorpius :( And Albus. I expected one of their fathers to be the murderer but at the beginning I was leaning more towards Draco.

*sniff* This was so sad. But incredibly good.

I also liked that Draco raised Scorpius to be a Ravenclaw ^^

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dorothy_in_oz July 15 2008, 07:35:14 UTC
Draco never wanted his son to be a Slytherin, for he knew what it was like. So, Ravenclaw was the only option really - a Malfoy in gryffindor was unthinkable, and in Hufflepuff? No way!

Thanks for your words!

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