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confessorlove July 22 2011, 00:37:55 UTC
Oh I love how Kahlan doesn't seem to understand Rahl being kind to her. It's like this is such a foreign concept for her. Great job.

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dorothydeath July 22 2011, 06:30:19 UTC
Yeah, she would have a hard time wrapping her mind about that. XDD
Thank you! :D

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dorothydeath July 22 2011, 06:33:17 UTC
Darkenish - Yay!))) Thank you! :D

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hrhrionastar July 22 2011, 01:25:37 UTC
Lovely :D The balcony scene is just perfect for them :D

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dorothydeath July 22 2011, 06:39:54 UTC
Aww))) Thank you, bb! :D And you know it wouldn't be so without you! ^_^
(I just can't stop flailing that you're my beta :D)

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brontefanatic July 22 2011, 04:07:49 UTC
Loved the quiet way Darken made his point when they were on the balcony.

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dorothydeath July 22 2011, 06:42:46 UTC
Yay! I'm so glad you liked it!))) Thank you, bb! :D

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meridian_rose July 24 2011, 19:20:48 UTC
Sorry it took me a while to get to this. I had to skim back over the earlier chapters to refresh my memory :D

Darken helps her, but Kahlan can still only see the evil side of him. So when he points out that though she's now bound to him via the Devotional, she still possesses self-will unlike a binding via Confession - "Had I been Confessed and our positions reversed - I would have jumped." she's stunned into silence :D

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dorothydeath July 24 2011, 21:43:44 UTC
Yeah... It's been a while since I last updated, I'm sorry! I did warn I was a slowpoke though. XDD

Thank you for reading and reviewing! Your comments and insights mean a lot to me! ^_^

she's stunned into silence
Yeah. Exactly so! :D Now Kahlan has some things to think about. :D I hope...
But it's still just the second day of their marriage. They have a loooong road ahead of them. I hope...
I so want to believe I can pull it off.

Thanks for your support! :D

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