'Tis a Sonnet!!! Lovely. And yeah, the sound of the last couplet is a little funky, tho I think it can work if you decide to leave it. Either way, I love (word choice?) the sentiment expressed. It's a strong image. I'll try to mull over some ideas to tweak it if you want. (And the same 2nd stanza question as your other comment... THEN towards the ground? Just a typo, I think)
Subject matter... *hugs* Just remember, everyone feels like that at some point. Many points, even. You're not alone in that one. And you're beautiful and wonderful and awesome and amazing and talented and lovely. And the end. <3
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ps I haven't seen you in forever. It makes me sad. and you're wicked lucky that you don't have to deal with Morochnick this year. lol
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And I've heard he's kinda lost it this year. I feel bad for you all :(
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And yeah, the sound of the last couplet is a little funky, tho I think it can work if you decide to leave it. Either way, I love (word choice?) the sentiment expressed. It's a strong image. I'll try to mull over some ideas to tweak it if you want.
(And the same 2nd stanza question as your other comment... THEN towards the ground? Just a typo, I think)
Subject matter... *hugs*
Just remember, everyone feels like that at some point. Many points, even. You're not alone in that one.
And you're beautiful and wonderful and awesome and amazing and talented and lovely.
And the end.
<3
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