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[dosaiakerrin]

burning up in the dragons flame

Comments

[josh_asjl187]

a little stresses/forced sounding rhyme, and the pattern and measure is very random, but the message is strong

[dosaiakerrin]

when i rhyme i force it i cant do that just with flow, and my pattern is always random, i dont believe in mesure that often, i just go with what i think looks good