Endlessly (2/2)

[doubledutchh]

Endlessly. 4k words. Hyukmin. Rated G. 45% fictional!
#schoolfic #personalfic #songfic #hyukmin #eunhae
[Hyukjae’s a helping friend to his newly_converted_bisexual friend, Donghae. But maybe his help’s going a little too far.]
What to expect: BFF!EUNHAE, BISEXUAL!EUNHAEMING, FAB!MING (fabulous!ming

Comments

[bonchan24]

This story was so cute. Eunhyuk started to have a crush toward Sungmin. I wonder what Sungmin's answered when Donghae confessed ^^

[doubledutchh]

Well Sungmin said he sees Hyukjae and not Donghae uhm it's up there :))

[bonchan24]

OMG I am sorry. I think my comment above meant for part 1 kekeke XD
The story has slow progress but it's also fluffy sweet at the same time. Hyuk must be feel bad for donghae, but he still has yuri, right?
But how about wookie then? Will they break up?

[doubledutchh]

Sungmin has to give up Wookie then, for choosing Hyukjae :D

[unfollower]

"But out of all the black and white men around me, Sungmin’s the only one red." A good example of a line that made me just stop and stare, read it again, and feel it all over again. Because it makes so much sense, and it's quite beautiful in its simplicity. It's pretty straightforward at first, but when you read it again, it holds a deeper meaning. Wow.

"...He repeats, softly, and this time, my smile fades. I stare back at him. The way he calls my name is like magic. It pulls me even closer, or he pulls himself closer to me, and it feels too good for me not to send heat on my cheeks. It’s when I feel a warm touch of hand topping mine, and I’m sure my hand didn’t move an inch.

Just had to quote it all because you caught a moment so flawlessly I again was stunned. I mean, I've been in this situation too. I could feel what Hyukjae felt and I didn't feel like a spectator anymore; I felt like I was Hyukjae, and relived that moment I had myself one time long ago. I also like the fact that you subtly showed, not told, how Sungmin took his

[doubledutchh]

Wow now that was a cooooooooomment (because it was long). I'm really really glad you liked it :) Now I'm afraid on the following fics I might not satisfy you as much as this fic did
:)) Anyway I didnt mind, I actually added you too (or what term should that be, I dont know LJ very much lol). Xie xie!

[chocolaiit]

ok finally a proper comment since i've already heard everything non-fictional behind this fiction story!
i need a sequel? xD jk. hahaha
idk but i think sungmin here is such a douche yeah.

sungmin is indeed a douche ;_;

[doubledutchh]

A sequel *gasps*
Lol omg I was actually thinking of posting the /sad/ alternative ending, not a sequel :))
And I think Hyukjae here is a bastard.

#assuming