the sound of art

[xiahtic]

the sound of art
jaejoong/changmin
PG-13
warning. character death
a/n. not so sure at all about this, but i had it in my head and it wasn't going away. ending was going to be alternate, but it's what i originally planned on writing, so i kept it.

Comments

[kallistei]

:((( What.

[xiahtic]

asl;dkf :(((((( i...dk. T_T

[kallistei]

*picks up shattered heart-pieces* :(

[xiahtic]

sldkfj ;_____; *helps in mending...?*

[blurmeese]

um yeah let me hand you the shattered remains of my heart on silver platter, you deserve that much since you broke it

D:

My morbid fascination with deathfics made me read this the moment I saw the words character death and askjdnasjknk yes this was beautiful. Love how your prose just winds through the whole plot so nicely (...laugh at my adjective go ahead D:) and the recurring movie theme, the love is a little like dying, oh. Oh.

Changmin fit really well into his art student role here and maybe it's just fangirl delusions but he always seems cut out for characters like this~ What I especially liked was how...withheld, maybe a little stoic you wrote him out next to Jaejoong and that just brought their best parts out. Fav? That little interlude with the this: thing in ()s :D

The credits roll, and the art keeps on living

Owh. It hurts so good.

[xiahtic]

sdkjfh aww, i'll try to mend them with something happier soon...

♥♥ thank you SO much. i'm really pleased that you managed to see it like i wanted it to come across, because parts of it just didn't seem like they'd make much sense to me and i worry about things like that sdkjfh dies /ramble and again, thank you ♥ :)

[mrsedjack]

(What I was planning on saying: It's fics like this one that makes me happy that I check HUG now and then. Usually I just check the JaeMin community, and I didn't see this one there.)

But now I'm just kind of: ;___________________; guh.

[xiahtic]

yeah, i don't like to spam everyone's flists, so i don't xpost to the pairings comms >.>;;; ♥ but thank you so much! i'm so happy it made sense like i wanted it to, haha! :DD

[toaster_x]

D: I don't know you, but I hate you for making my heart break ;__;

Okay, I'm lying. I love this & I love you for making my heart twist. I have this strange liking for sad fics, even if they don't make me happy, because sad fics always make you feel.

The last line was epic. Just epic.

'The credits roll, and the art keeps on living' Guh. I died.

But thank you for writing this, its beautiful. Strangely though, I have to mention this. The part about Jaejoong's constantly changing hair colour made me laugh slightly, because seriously, I just thought of a Jaejoong without hair, because that much dye makes your hair drop.

But this was wonderful ♥

I shall shut up now, this is getting too long ><'

[xiahtic]

dies, i love long comments, so it's totally okay! :))) i'm so pleased you enjoyed the read, though, and the last line i was really unsure of in that i was giving too much away. so thank you so much for your comment and for reading this. :)) ♥♥!

[xiahtic]

ee, that was one of my favorite bits, in that i loved how it came out and didn't have to edit XDD ♥♥ thank you for the comment, and the add to your memories :))) <33