eyes wide shut

[lovescone]

eyes wide shut
minho/key
pg-13 for language
3,124w
warnings: implied character death
a/n: for pause ♥ this was originally for my five things meme below, but as you can see it kind of got away with me. i'm still trying to figure key out, so if there's anything at all off to you about my characterization, feel free to point it out. i'd love the advice

Comments

[hikaritsubasa]

i felt this was heart warming...
love it...

[lovescone]

thank you ♥♥ glad i could warm your heart :3

[a_life_defiant]

Wow, the alternate variations of Key were really interesting. All the ‘what ifs’ - very cool.

HUZZAH for MinKey making up at the end….and Taemin, so funny. The observant little maknae, keke

♥

[lovescone]

haha, yeah, i can never resist having taemin snark ♥ thank you so much~

[lovescone]

slkdfjs your comments always make me feel so happy, megan ♥♥ HOW DID I LIVE WITHOUT YOU, I MEAN RLY sobs thank you ;_______; ♥

Amazing and beautiful is amazing and beautiful, as Minkey is Minkey. <3

[sunshiner_krys]

This is beautiful. I love Minkey. <3 Added to my memories~ (This is such a short comment, I'll be back to make a longer one later and I will be sure to quote my favorite lines!) I really do love this a lot~

Re: Amazing and beautiful is amazing and beautiful, as Minkey is Minkey. <3

[lovescone]

any comment is special to me, dw about long/short!! :) ♥♥ and thank you, i'm flattered you think it's mem-worthy, sobs. <3

Re: Amazing and beautiful is amazing and beautiful, as Minkey is Minkey. <3

[sunshiner_krys]

Hey, I had some free time today and as I was going through fics, I realized I had yet to make the longer comment I was talking about before to you~! So here I am… Haha.

taemin wisely keeps himself out of the way except to tell minho, "i think you're both being ridiculous, just so you know."

So I liked this line from the first time I read it, and now as I am re-reading it for the second time, it just makes me think, “Ah, what a smart maknae…” Haha.

For the first…err…different reality/could have been thing, well…I was just thinking of how sad it would be for Kibum to not know Minho. ☹ Kibummie even called Minho insane in this one!

this is a kibum who's made different choices than the kibum he knows, and it's done something irreparable to him.

Gosh, if Kibum never joined SHINee… ☹ That line really sticks out to me though, because it makes me wonder...
For the second one…Yeah, Kibum could have been a fashion designer~ Haha. And Minho saying he had surgery because he couldn’t tell Kibum why he wasn’t his age. Funny~ ☺

he hurries

Re: Amazing and beautiful is amazing and beautiful, as Minkey is Minkey. <3

[sunshiner_krys]

Aha~ My part two! <3 ._. I actually had to have a part two to my comment. Just shows how amazing your work is.

For the fourth one, very much alive Kibum! YESS! MinKey confrontation~!

"you know damn well what happened, it was you, it's always you," kibum shouts

I know Kibum isn’t happy, and he is shouting, but still. Ah, be still, my MinKey heart~

"i hate you. i fucking hate you, choi minho. i don't even know why i liked you, but i did, and you just. you wouldn't listen. so i had to make you listen."

“look, talk to them. to minho. he'll... he's not as straight and narrow as you think." kibum's stunned face starts to blur out, so minho just grins at him. "i think he likes you, too."

I smiled. I honestly did while reading that. Yes, Minho does like his Kibum.

Fifth/last one, and Minho’s return home! Really, can I quote the whole thing? I am in love with this part.

"can we make up now?" minho says, cutting straight to the chase. "i don't like it when any of us fight, and i hate even more that it's us."Yes, the “us” that is

[lovescone]

there really isn't! :( and you don't sound lame at all, trust me. i appreciate the comment so much, thank you. ♥♥