Fic: Times Fool, 1/?

[doves_wing]

Title:  Times Fool
Author: doves_wing
Beta: The awesometastic czarina_kitty 
Pairing: Nine/Jack/Rose
Rating: PG-15
Genre: Suspense, slight Horror
Warnings: If you had a bad medical experience, this might not be for you. Nothing too explicit, but better safe than sorry...
Summary: When Rose, Jack, and the Doctor make their way back to the TARDIS after a long day, they

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[dshael]

::shiver::

[doves_wing]

=)

[wendymr]

*echoes dshael's shiver*

Wow - scary in both sections! Something's definitely wrong with the Doctor if he's getting that upset because Rose complained that he hasn't fixed the shower system yet. And then that section in italics: I don't know at this stage if it's a nightmare, something that's actually happened to them, or a premonition, but whichever it is, it's chilling.

More soon, I hope?

Thanks!

[doves_wing]

More soon, yep! Trying to stay a chapter or so ahead, otherwise I'll never finish...

[maniacalshen]

The Doctor frowned. “You try it. Not like you do anything useful anyways,”

Yeowch. Way to hit Rose where she's probably most vulnerable, on a ship with a Time Lord and former Time Agent.

As to the last two bits: eep!

[doves_wing]

=) Thanks for commenting!