Comments | downcomesthesky: Untitled #8

downcomesthesky

Untitled #8

Jul 13, 2004 23:19

Of the seconds spent
dreaming of your shape
I have to say
that the most beautiful one
was when your eyes
finally glanced past mine
and then paused
only to return
and find harmony
in my gaze.

I always loved that part...

It reminds me
of that morning in the bathroom
looking into the mirror
you decided
that you could find safety
beneath the shadows
of my long lashes
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Comments 7

I wanna do you drklotus31 July 14 2004, 19:50:13 UTC

That was amazing..thats really great writing..it makes me..wanna..wanna.have sex with you..kekeke..your an awesome writer and i love you

Re: I wanna do you downcomesthesky July 14 2004, 19:56:24 UTC

hmmm...
sometimes when all of the lights are off, and I think of myself and how beautiful I am, i have that same problem...

anonymous July 14 2004, 20:04:34 UTC

ah, love. so wonderful.

story_ina_dream July 20 2004, 15:39:25 UTC

ABI its christy i saw you yesterday! at heb with jake, your freind bill is quite gorgeous! i got his number and im planning on calling him! you are by far one of the most funny people ive met and the cop was quite amused by you saying "officer im taking my pants off to show them my underwear..." it was wonderful!

bill is so fine....oh yeahh....

Taht suxed anonymous July 23 2004, 15:03:20 UTC

U rite really bad. i hate it. itd crap. i think u should never rite agan and so do my friends.

p.s my friends think u should kill urself lol

Re: Taht suxed freauxdeaux July 31 2004, 15:34:59 UTC

i think your grammar really sucks. i hate it.
please, get a life

Re: Taht suxed downcomesthesky July 31 2004, 20:40:19 UTC

yes!

i've got strangers on my side!

oh, how wonderful life is.