inhale, exhale. ; onew x key x ot5 ; pg-13

[doyouknowwhy]

"inhale, exhale.
one-shot / onew x key x ot5 / pg 13 / 1335 words

→ jinki waits, waits, waits for kibum to come while he counts the limitless drops on his window pane, counts the beats of his high heart.

Comments

[anonymous]

i never know if this kind of statement means anything to anyone, but when i read this i instantly saw it as a short film. maybe it's because while there isn't much happening in a physical or traditional plot sense, there are very tangible emotions from the scenes you give us. the actions that do happen also reinforce those emotions really well, which is why i think i get a cinematic sense from it.

weird commentary aside--
oh my heart, i loved this.
so well written and beautiful ♥

[owlbee]

oh my, i forgot to log in before comment >.<

(:

[doyouknowwhy]

oh, bb. ♥

this comment's the best comment i have ever received! judging from my previous works, i have indeed strayed away from the traditional plot development and focused more on the character flow and portrayal as short films would show. i also love it when i read slow progressing but creatively crafted fiction; especially when they describe the littlest details. maybe that's how i'm influenced. ; o; ah, this comment means so much to me!

thank you very much for the love! you are beautiful as well. ♥

[meltrules]

ugh this is like really osm and idk incoherent now because well, idk this is so osm and kibum is portrayed so well and gahhhh why haven't i read your fics sooner my life would have been easier and ♥
hi. i love your writing.(:

[doyouknowwhy]

hi, i love you more. ♥

thank you and key's a total jjong!whore who's looking for some onew-toppings, which probably explains the bipolar portrayal. huh, onkey seems so ninja and non-existent it hurts. ;____;

your incoherence amuses me, hon. it really does. 8D