upside down. (part two) ; onew x key ; pg-16

Feb 25, 2011 18:39

"upside down (part two).
one-shot / onew x key / romance; angst; slice of life / pg 16 / (6,364/11,401 words)

→ Every night Kibum was left alone, he hangs down the balcony railings, upside down, legs hooked in rusting bars, and breathes the cold air that prevails every time he breathes. They were just beautifully wasted, Jinki thinks.

Perhaps, he just wants Kibum to at least hang upside down with him, where they can forget all that is in this stereotypical world and live on their own universe. )

p: onew/key, f: shinee, g: romance, wc: 5000+, g: general, r: pg-16

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ringdingdong19 February 25 2011, 18:26:06 UTC
the best [long] onkey i've read in lj for quite sometime
thank you for making this fic! i've been craving for some good onkey :D
<3

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doyouknowwhy February 26 2011, 12:28:24 UTC
oh, really? there's a lot more better long!fics out there and i'm just starting to get a hang of this long!fic environment. ; v; thank you, bb! i hope i see you around reading more long!fics because the fanfiction community has always lacked the length of words. thank you for reading! ♥♥♥

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volatileflame February 25 2011, 19:36:17 UTC
this was amazing <3

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doyouknowwhy February 26 2011, 12:28:54 UTC
thank you for reading, bb! ♥

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olebade February 26 2011, 01:05:20 UTC
i think i love you for this fic XD

onkey was my first otp when i entered the shinee fandom. then i grew away from them. thank you for bringing me back to them :)

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doyouknowwhy February 26 2011, 12:31:22 UTC
i love you more for taking the time to read this long piece! * o*

jongkey was actually my first ever otp when i entered the fandom last '08, if i'm not mistaken and i too grew away from the jongkey-ness. but onkey has never failed to be beautiful and mysterious and that's the amazing thing otps can do to your life.

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slickcaffeine February 26 2011, 09:43:59 UTC
yes, have my heart with this . completely gorgeous <3

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doyouknowwhy February 26 2011, 12:32:25 UTC
have mine as well! ♥ thank you for that wonderful comment, bb! i appreciate you taking your time to read this! ♥

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peanutsparty February 27 2011, 13:44:38 UTC
*hearts a million times*

i love this...so beautifully poignant and heartwrenching <3

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doyouknowwhy March 7 2011, 08:31:05 UTC
thank you for reading, bb! ^^ have a heart from me too! ♥

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