Blue Skies and Pain, Part One

Jun 22, 2014 10:01

Reid stood outside ICU room #5, staring at the sleeping figure in the bed.  His heart raced in his chest, and his stomach rolled.  He thought he might be sick.  He eyed the garbage can in the corner, wondering how many steps it would take him to get there ( Read more... )

luke reid atwt, author:artist dpracket

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gypsiesheart June 23 2014, 00:21:32 UTC
Ohhhhhh. More soon please!

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dpracket June 25 2014, 04:39:09 UTC
I'm trying. Lol.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

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moerlin June 23 2014, 00:37:13 UTC
Oh, hurt/comfort with a twist? Gimme! :D Definitely did not see the boyfriend coming, I was all naive and thinking he was texting Katie.

Glad to see you writing again, and I hope your muses and schedule cooperate so you can break poor, probably innocent Reid's boyfriend's heart.

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dpracket June 25 2014, 04:45:56 UTC
I'm glad you didn't see the boyfriend coming...that's what I was HOPING. My schedule is not going to cooperate, but hopefully I'll have another chapter before the end of the week. It shouldn't be a long fic. Maybe four or five chapters.

I don't want to break anyone's heart, but I think it's inevitable. Reid is in love with this guy though,so unfortunately if the story goes that way, there will be collateral damage. :(

Thank you for reading and commenting!

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kccalgal June 23 2014, 02:37:39 UTC
Dear lady I am so so happy to see you start a story and this one appears to be a meaty one, Huzzah!!!!!!!! What a good start.

I hope RL cooperates enough for you to update.

I for one did figure he was calling a boyfriend when he said he'd be late. This will add such an amazing dynamic. Did I say this was a good start? I was wrong, its a great, fantastic, wonderful start.

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dpracket June 25 2014, 04:47:21 UTC
You figured it out! Lol.

Thanks for the great compliment.

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cindym99 June 23 2014, 21:20:44 UTC
ummmm....if this goes the wrong way let me know -I'll read "I hate you" for the 40th time to comfort me....:-)

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dpracket June 25 2014, 04:49:18 UTC
I honestly don't know how this will go, but I do know that this is a LuRe fandom, and we believe in happy endings for these two guys. So, I do promise an ending where our guys are happy. Whether or not they are together at the end remains to be seen.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

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sleeper6 June 26 2014, 13:47:03 UTC
Hmm, not sure what to think of Luke possibly hurting himself or being hurt by someone. *shudders* Don't want to think about it. :(

Reid opened his eyes and continued to survey Luke: days worth of stubble on his dimpled chin, a new scar by his left eyebrow, chipped black nail polish on his fingers.
Never thought of Luke painting his nails but okay, I'll go along with this for now until he reveals what's been going on.

I do love how Reid just cannot stay away from Luke, even after Luke left him, even after Luke not contacting him in forever, even after having moved on himself, Reid still is consumed by Luke. Their attraction is so powerful. :)

Interesting start.

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dpracket August 26 2014, 19:52:51 UTC
Sorry for the late response.

Their attraction is very powerful.

Luke is lost though in a lot of ways.

Thanks for reading and commenting! :)

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