A Chiswick Christmas Carol 7/8 + Epilogue

Jul 06, 2010 20:24

Title: A Chiswick Christmas Carol 7/8 + Epilogue
Beta: The wonderful glory_jean who's been doing a wonderful job, thanks!
A/N: Apologies for this taking a while, but y'all know how it is. (Kay, not southern so I'm definitely not using that again). Hope you enjoy! Comments welcome!

A Chiswick Christmas Carol- Part Seven )

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spellweaver731 July 7 2010, 02:24:17 UTC
Oh, I loved this chapter. I loved the way having Rose there changed the Doctor's reactions and mood so much. That is exactly what would have happened. Once again I adore the way you wrote the Rose/Donna interactions. I love the two of them together so much. Can't wait for the last few parts!

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pippnfrodo July 7 2010, 03:33:39 UTC
*blushes* Wow, well thanks very much! I'm glad you've continued to enjoy this so much!
I actually did have a bit of a hard time trying to figure out just what would change with Rose there this time, so I'm glad it seems to have come out well! And like I've said, these three are just so much fun to write that it actually came kind of easily, much to my relief. ;)
Thanks again, and I hope you enjoy the rest just as much too!

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mrs_roy July 7 2010, 02:56:02 UTC

I love that Rose knows he's about to do something stoopid! That's exactly why he needs her.

Rose gently squeezed his arm, drawing his attention. “We, Doctor. We’re in this together.” She corrected him, her voice gentle. “You’re not alone anymore,” Rose reminded him, reaching up lightly kiss him on the cheek and brush dark strands of hair away from wide, vulnerable eyes. “You have me.” - Eee. I loved this!

Makes me wonder what else he has in his pockets ;)

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pippnfrodo July 7 2010, 03:36:53 UTC
Mm hmm, exactly! And most of the time she can at least *try* to stop him... not that it always works.
I'm glad you liked that bit. It kind of just came to me, cause you know that he was so afraid he'd be alone and needs a little reassurance from her. Plus, any fluff with the two of them is just so much fun to write! ^^
Yeah, especially since they're bigger on the inside and all. Except, you have to wonder just how long some of that stuff has been in there....

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alizarin_skies July 7 2010, 08:01:11 UTC
Yay! What a lovely update :)
I really like how you turned the angst of this scene into D/R fluff, and I guess the scene will serve as ab opening for the Doctor to tell Rose about Galifrey... Looking forward to the last couple of chapters :D

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pippnfrodo July 7 2010, 18:57:47 UTC
Thanks very much! And I tried to do more fluff than angst, since God knows we could all use more Ten/Rose fluff, right? I suppose it could too... I didn't really think of that. ^^;;

Thanks, and I hope you like the last few chapters too!

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emraldeyedauter July 20 2010, 03:35:26 UTC
Very very good. The scene where he goes back to the creation ofearth is beautiful and one of favourite parts of the episode. Not long to go now. Looking forward to the last piece

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pippnfrodo July 20 2010, 03:37:48 UTC
Thanks very much! I think that's one of my favorite scenes too, and it was just perfect to cheer up Donna. Hope you enjoy the rest!

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