Comments | dr_2nd_chances: Mr. & Mrs. Smith. Part 1.

mrs_roy in dr_2nd_chances

Mr. & Mrs. Smith. Part 1.

Jul 25, 2010 20:56

Comments 10

alizarin_skies July 25 2010, 11:49:35 UTC

YAY!!! I've been waiting for this :D
Lovely start, I'm really enjoying how you're adapting the story around Rose. Now if I can just figure out WHO is the elderly woman...

mrs_roy July 25 2010, 11:57:07 UTC

I'm so pleased to hear you say that, because I'm still not entirely pleased with this episode! I've had a few really bad weeks of late and my writing has really suffered!

Rose fitted in quite easily to be honest.

As for the elderly woman, I'm afraid you've got a wait on your hands, my dear! I'm glad my sneaky plan is working though ;)

alizarin_skies July 25 2010, 12:01:30 UTC

I'm sorry to hear that you had a rough time, but the chapter came out really brilliantly... The addition of the lady as an unknown factor especially added an extra oomph to the story ;D

*tries to patiently wait for the next update XD*

mrs_roy July 25 2010, 12:10:31 UTC

Thanks honey! I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and, that I've got you on your toes. With no Martha, I knew straight off who the 'helper' would be.

*Waits with you XD*

dani_meows July 25 2010, 16:07:25 UTC

This is brilliant and lovely!

I really enjoyed reading it.

The Doctor backed her against the banana display and watched as the bright yellow fruit toppled to a halt at his feet. He pressed his mouth to her ear and growled as his hands harnessed her against the sheer magnetism of his rigid body.

“I’ll do so much more that than if you like, I’ll take you right here, Rose Tyler. Just give me a reason.

I especially loved that bit.

mrs_roy July 25 2010, 21:28:02 UTC

Thank you. I'm so pleased to hear that you enjoyed it.

Heh, it seemed a little OOC to me at first, but then I thought, no, if he was given that chance with Rose, really given that chance, I'm not sure he would waste it again.

I'm so glad you loved it. I aim to please!

spellweaver731 July 26 2010, 20:52:18 UTC

Hurray! I love this series. Great start, I love the way you changed the story, not just placed Rose in Martha's spot. Can't wait for the next chapter :D

mrs_roy August 2 2010, 02:17:56 UTC

Thanks a bunch! Rose was easy to slot in. The story that built around her was the hard part. I think I've managed to pull it off and I really hope you enjoy part 2!

emraldeyedauter July 31 2010, 05:20:24 UTC

I loved this when you first showed it to me hon and its still great.

mrs_roy August 2 2010, 02:18:19 UTC

Thanks hon, means a lot! *Huggles*