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clair3 February 5 2011, 02:54:21 UTC
omg this is soooooooooooo good! is there more or this is the end of it?

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osaki_nana_707 February 5 2011, 05:35:30 UTC
Oh, Jesus, this is DIVINE. I saw it on the community and thought it looked good, but this is so much better than good. It's scary and heart-breaking and suspenseful in all of the best ways. There are a few errors scattered throughout, but nothing too distracting or noticeable, and since English isn't your first language it's actually quite impressive. You have a better handle on your English than some English speakers I know (lol).

Looking forward to the next chapter! Happy Writing!

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v0id_dweller February 5 2011, 07:58:27 UTC
You are a wonderful writer. I truly loved this.
<3

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synekdokee February 5 2011, 08:05:57 UTC
This is a very tricky subject to write, but so far I'm finding this pretty damn riverting. Can't wait to read the second part.

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