Oh, Jesus, this is DIVINE. I saw it on the community and thought it looked good, but this is so much better than good. It's scary and heart-breaking and suspenseful in all of the best ways. There are a few errors scattered throughout, but nothing too distracting or noticeable, and since English isn't your first language it's actually quite impressive. You have a better handle on your English than some English speakers I know (lol).
Looking forward to the next chapter! Happy Writing!
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Looking forward to the next chapter! Happy Writing!
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