Poem

[dr_nabe]

Just a little something we were forced to write in English class

Comments

[torisrabbit]

you write wonderfully.

[dr_nabe]

Thanks

[dr_nabe]

I love feedback of all kind and I thank you for sharing your opinion.

[mezzafrezza]

Heh, interesting poem for an English assignment. I love how it sounds all solemn, and then there's a tinge of innocent humor: "I'm sorry / I'm sorry / But it was my chair first." I like the perspective of the child's.

This was very nice.

(By the way, I'm sorry it took so long for me to get back to you on these.)

Keep writing.