[FIC] Normal People's Doings on Hot Summer Nights (BBC Sherlock)

[dr_watsonette]

So, this is the moment. My fanfic virginity is lost forever, with this first post. It's written in a matter of hours, so feel free to correct any mistakes, misplaces tags/ratings and what not.
Huge thanks goes out to shouldboverthis  and the The Really, Really Short Form post, which inspired me to get writing.

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Title: Normal

Comments

[tiwtin]

Lol... Poor John! :oD

[dr_watsonette]

Very! I almost felt bad for ending it like this ;)

[errantcomment]

I liked the mental image of Sherlock dropping the pillow on his face, and you got the humid atmosphere down too.
Thanks. ^_^

[dr_watsonette]

Thank you so much, and thanks for reading/commenting ^^ In the moment it made sense to have him behave like that - and I do so dig his odd, childish behavior when he is suffering from boredom ;)

[rabidsamfan]

*snicker* Yes, it could use a good betaing for grammar and phrasing. (Anxiously instead of angstly, for example) but the story is hilarious. Well done!

[dr_watsonette]

Thank you, much appreciated :) You are very right though regrettably there is little I can do about it (I'll edit the given example though, and possibly go over the story again later) outside of keeping on practising my English x.x

[shouldboverthis]

Oh, delish! Now you're one of us and such a promising start. :)

(Please tell me that John is going to show Sherlock what HE had in mind to do with the condoms ^^ or maybe Sherlock already knows...)

Through their open living room windows they could hear the alarming sound of silence.

John knew this was the worst possible sound to Sherlock's ears, when he was in one of his moods.

Really wonderful lines and imagery!

[dr_watsonette]

Haha ^^ Thank you so much! X)

Beyond flattered, while still being awfully aware I have a long way to go (being Danish not exactly a help either (and yes, I will maintain the right to hide behind that excuse for a while! XP).

Thanks for the awesome comment(s)!

And who knows about John, maybe he will, maybe he won't ;)~

[c0ntrarywise]

Ahahaha, that was wonderful :D I actually didn't catch what Sherlock really meant, either :P