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Deflagration (FFVII, Tifa and Barret, double-drabble)

Jul 04, 2013 15:58

Title: Deflagration
Fandom: FFVII
Characters/Pairings: Tifa, Barret
Rating: PG
Spoilers/Warnings: None
Summary: On the anniversary of Meteorfall. (200 word double-drabble)

( There's different names for it. )

prompt #65 - fireworks, fandom: final fantasy vii, rating: pg, author: silvr_dagger

Comments 2

flecksofpoppy July 10 2013, 02:17:45 UTC

THIS IS SO GOOD.

I'm sorry for being a jerk and not commenting on this earlier. My brain has been MIA, though it made a reappearance tonight, so I went immediately to read this.

I love your use of the prompt!! It was PERFECT. It's the centerpiece of these two drabbles as a metaphor, and it just works perfectly with your elegant descriptions and layered meanings. I am also a massive supporter of anything Barret-related. XD I love this little glimpse into their lives post-Meteor, and the bittersweet note it strikes is just perfect. Also, the cards from Yuffie made me laugh. Ohh, guys. I'll never get tired of our old friends in the Final Fantasy VII universe.

Thank you for posting, and thank you for writing. <3

silvr_dagger July 11 2013, 16:25:00 UTC

Heh, thanks! I'm really happy you liked them, as I wasn't certain whether the metaphor actually worked here or not... I love FFVII because it's such a layered world and story (with occasional derpy moments as well, granted), and it's always fun to write about these characters. And yes, I totally agree with you on Barret. XD