Sanctuary - Chapter Nineteen

Jan 26, 2011 03:44

Title: Sanctuary
Author: drabbles_by_v
Characters/Pairings: Aaron Hotchner/Spencer Reid, team
Rating: FRAO/NC-17
Word Count:  3,656
Disclaimer: Criminal Minds is not mine and I'm making no profit by playing with their characters. 
Warnings:  AU, slash, assumes knowledge through season 5.  This chapter relies ( Read more... )

hotch/reid, sanctuary, au

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maldeluxx January 26 2011, 12:55:57 UTC
This chapter feels all 'wobbly', leaving one to wonder about things... still, I like it a lot :)

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drabbles_by_v January 28 2011, 10:01:24 UTC
lol, writing it felt pretty wobbly, too. Thank you. :)

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impulsiveanswer January 26 2011, 14:45:12 UTC
It hurts to see Spencer so lost and torn - loving Aaron but being so angry and so scared of being abandoned again - but I love that he's still leaving the door open for Aaron, and I love that Aaron is making himself available and trying to keep him safe all at the same time. Kudos to Father James and his little chat with Aaron; he's a good father figure, one that Spencer deserves and desperately needs. I know Foyet's return is just around the corner and I'm anxious to see how that plays out...

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drabbles_by_v January 28 2011, 10:06:41 UTC
Poor Spencer, he needs hugs but he's scared to get them. I'm glad you liked it, I hope you like where I go with it. :) Thanks!

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daylyn January 26 2011, 19:39:31 UTC
First, sorry that RL is sucking. I hope your employers get their ass in gear and figure out the what they're doing. Good luck.

Second,I Spencer's vulnerability and pain and fear and anger and indignation and all his myriad emotions swirling around in his brilliant mind. And I love Aaron's acknowledgment that he is falling apart without Spencer and his realization of how much pain he caused his lover.

The threat of Foyet looms heavily over them and I fear the agony it will cause them. I love Father James as Spencer's father-figure and the obvious sense of love, pride, and concern he has for the young man. And I loved Spencer's "I’m torn between wanting to ride your cock and wanting to knee you in the balls," comment because... yeah... Aaron kind of deserves that too (and the embarrassment was quite amusing. Poor Spencer.)

Update when you can (I know how RL can suck out the writing-mojo). Just know that I'll be waiting anxiously for an update until you do.

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drabbles_by_v January 28 2011, 10:23:01 UTC
The really annoying part is that it isn't even my employers, it's permits getting caught up in various offices and the electrician they hired doing things like randomly flying to Florida and holding everything up. >.< *sighs* But I got a call today that the biggest permit went through, so it should be soon! *crosses fingers*

And, lol, I'm so mean to Spencer. If he isn't getting his heart broken he's embarrassing himself in front of someone. I'm glad you're still enjoying the story, thank you. <3

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aunt_magick January 26 2011, 20:17:04 UTC
The threat of Foyet makes me really nervous--hoping for a happy ending here. The way you describe Spencer's conflicting emotions regarding Aaron is so real it's painful. Really great chapter and I can't wait for the next update.

I hate that real life is being a bitch for you, and I know it is trite to say this, but hang in there. I'm sending lots of good energies your way.

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drabbles_by_v January 28 2011, 10:24:01 UTC
Aw, thanks, means a lot. :)

And I'm really glad you find the emotions real, that's my main goal with writing, so that's great to hear. Thank you!

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cmali January 27 2011, 01:46:06 UTC
What a wonderful, but heart-wrenching chapter. Damn you Foyet, and damn you Karl Arnold, you bastards! This move to Aaron's is going to be tough, but I know they're gonna make it. They have to. That's all I got...

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drabbles_by_v January 28 2011, 10:24:58 UTC
But without them who would cause the boys pain? *evil grin* Thank you so much. :)

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