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[drabbles_by_v]

“Keep breathing!  Oh god, you have to keep breathing!  Aaron!”

Hotch coughed and blood came out.  His breath was a wet rattle.

Reid kept his hands pressed down over the wound through his chest.  He was shaking badly, doing his best not to look to his right.  “Come on, keep your eyes open, look at me,” he begged.  Blood was leaking out from

Comments

[daylyn]

You... this... Wow....

Brilliant, brilliant angst. I'm seriously tearing up here. Thank you so, so much for my birthday gift. I especially love stories that have an emotional intensity and this... yeah... just about gutted me. I could feel Spencer's desperation and the love between him and Aaron. And I even felt sorry for Isabelle, although she was responsible for Aaron's death (and Spencer's intense pain).

Beautifully done. I love it. Thank you again.

(And I'm thrilled that my comments for "Sanctuary" help you keep writing, because I definitely look forward to your updates.)

[drabbles_by_v]

Yay! That's all I could hope for, gutting you on your birthday...um...wait. lol, I'm really glad you liked it. :)

So good

[anonymous]

So so so good but so sad. Now I need gratutious amounts of fluff.
Loving Sanctuary too.
Xx

Re: So good

[drabbles_by_v]

Thank you. :) Yeah, I kind of need some fluff too after that.

[gc_anthem_fan]

So good, so beautiful, but so horrible all in one. I actually teared up, just a little.

[drabbles_by_v]

I listened to the saddest song I could find and wrote it and definitely teared up. Thank you so much. :)

[maldeluxx]

*grabby hands* Ahhh, that was so sad :(

[drabbles_by_v]

Aw, sorry! Thank you for reading and commenting. :)

[impulsiveanswer]

This beautiful angsty piece broke my heart!

[drabbles_by_v]

Sorry! Though that was the goal, so, good to hear. ^^; Thank you for commenting!