Comments | dracc: Yellow No. 5

dracc

Yellow No. 5

Jan 24, 2005 23:47

The following is the beggining of my short play, Yellow No. 5 ( Read more... )

Comments 3

twofatpeople January 25 2005, 12:25:02 UTC

i dig the addition, brother, i think its goin pretty swimmingly, but im drunk on passion and its 4 30 in the damn morning, so what do you expect?

snickony January 25 2005, 20:17:03 UTC

I have two Qualms:

1. "Ya" is spelled y-e-a-h unless you're German

2. The names you have chosen are that of my Brother and my Dad

dracc January 26 2005, 05:32:06 UTC

Yeah is not the same word ya, wich is a northwestern United States contraction for you. And secondly, wow, you're right... That was in no way intentional.