Quiz Show Fic, Chapter 4

Oct 21, 2016 19:29

That shower will clean everything except my mind...

http://archiveofourown.org/works/7427122/chapters/19104874

fanfic, fanfic: quiz show

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takepluche December 27 2016, 21:53:17 UTC
Geez I'm so late 0___0 Sorry !!! In fact I've read the chapter for ages but I need time to write a proper commentary in english >< (ok two months are too much.... sorryyyyyyyyy ToT)

Honma looses his control more and more. As he said to himself, Kamiyama becomes his weakness, no doubt about it ! And he's jealous 8D Ok, I had an inkling of that BUT I didn't think that he could be angry because Kamiyama talked about Misaki. But... yeah, it was't the good moment at all XD especially because in the whole scene, Honma lost partly of his control so it was too much to bear, I guess XD

"Or will he keep Kamiyama in a state of aroused torture for the rest of the evening, forcing him to film the show whilst frustrated and unfulfilled?"--> You gonna say that I'm sadistic but I would like to see something like this 8D Just to see the two of them both excited and frustrated~ and the moment just after the show ( ... )

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draco_rattus December 29 2016, 20:48:03 UTC
Haha, it's okay! Thank you! I've been taking ages to reply to LiveJournal comments lately too. ^^;

As usual you see things with the characters which I don't even see myself, and that is amazing! Yes, Honma lost control of himself and he is angry at himself for that... but he got even more angry when Kamiyama said Misaki's name. It's like he feels Kamiyama isn't even worthy of saying Misaki's name, and he's jealous that Kamiyama might be thinking about Misaki and not him.

Oooh, keeping Kamiyama in a state of aroused torture... I think I should write that! :D Thank you for the idea, hehehehehe...

I need to write some actual Yoko/Sho too, not just Honma/Kamiyama!

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takepluche January 4 2017, 09:05:14 UTC
Oooh, keeping Kamiyama in a state of aroused torture... I think I should write that! :D Thank you for the idea, hehehehehe...
--> You're welcome 8D I hope you'll write it in your fic *-* I think Honma would enjoy so much seeing Kamiyama tortured in that way~ and that could excite him as well xD

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