PHASE I FIC: The Weak Things of the World by musamihi (PG)

[dracomods]

Title: The Weak Things of the World
Author: musamihi
Pairing(s): Gen
Rating: PG
Warnings: Moderate angst
Word Count: 2,900
Genre(s): Drama
Summary: Draco has only ever killed one thing, as far as he can remember.
Author’s Notes: The title is drawn from 1 Corinthians 1:27: But God hath chosen the foolish things of the world to confound the wise; and

Comments

[silvia_elisa]

I am speechless. That was so poignant and vivid... I have shivers all down my back. The Malfoys were absolutely stunning, and seen through the eyes of Draco I felt so helpless.

Wonderfully beautiful piece, thank you for writing it! ^^

[musamihi]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

[farfadine]

Thanks for using my drawing ^^
And your story is delicious, little Draco is cute and the Malfoy family interaction are really great ^^

[musamihi]

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it. :) And thanks for the lovely art - I enjoyed writing for it.

[farfadine]

you're welcome ^^

re: The Weak Things of the World

[vaysh]

I just discovered this. God, S., this is mind-blowing. I had to go back now from writing this comment to re-read it because ... wow, what a keen insight into Draco's youth and what a chilling, but so touching moment for him to remember his lost Mikrippon and the Muggle in the woods at the outskirts of the Manor ground. I am totally stunned by the way you describe the shifting of magic when Jack manages to see the Unplottable Malfoy woods. And I cannot help to feel both for the eager young boy who secretely pets his hurt Mikrippon under the table, and the older boy in the dark forest who may be a coward but does the right thing. Thanks for writing this, sweet. ♥

Farfadine, what a gorgeous work of art. Draco's haunted look, and the central Lumos within the tangle of branches, trunks and roots is wonderful done. I love the colours you used. ♥