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dracomaleficium

Fic: "Substitute" Chapter 8

Sep 15, 2012 11:28

Hey look, even more fic!

Title: "Substitute" chapter 8: Aftermath
Word Count: 4, 500
Rating: R
Warnings: Language, as usual
Characters/Pairings: Lt. Jee/Zuko
Summary: A 38-year-old former Navy officer currently trying to make a life as a gym teacher in a small community. A 17-year-old boy with severe Issues. One big mess.
In this chapter: A deal is struck ( Read more... )

fic: substitute, fanfiction, jeeko, atla

Comments 4

luunyscarlet September 17 2012, 16:15:40 UTC

Yay for optimistic Jee! I like that he gets so happy about being able to really help someone.

A certain police chief has a request.
So... Lin Bei Fong wants Jee to give her little blind relative lessons? Looking forward to it ;).

dracomaleficium September 17 2012, 22:02:48 UTC

Thank you!

Your guess was spot-on. Damn, now I won't be able to surprise you ;)

errantknightess October 4 2012, 20:40:49 UTC

That was a good chapter. A very, very good chapter. Exactly the kind of a breather we all needed - both the characters and your readers. So mellow! It makes me relaxed and happy :D I like the light atmosphere you created here; it really feels like the air clearing up after a night storm into a clear, breezy morning - a bright new day, full of hopes and possibilities. It's great to read your guys are (yet again!) getting their issues solved, slowly and carefully, all right, but this steady pace somehow gives a feeling that they're really building something firm... You know? Sorry if I speak like a loonie.

On a side note, I'm in a mood to marvel at your style. I don't remember if I've mentioned it to you already, but I greatly admire the way your narration flows, and how it draws conclusions from things it describes; and your POV is so consistent! I know you do get writing pains, but when one reads your works, none of that ever shows - it's all so effortless.

dracomaleficium October 5 2012, 20:31:42 UTC

I absolutely love the way you respond to everything in exactly the way I hoped people would respond :D You don't sound like a loon at all, hon, I treasure every single word! And I'm thrilled you liked this one too. Understandably, after the mess of The Koizilla Chapter I hoped this chapter will do the job of setting things straight and it's wonderful to see it worked.

And - awww, thank you so much! :D I don't know what to say now. *blush*