Story I've been working on

[dracosangel]

Hey guys, this is a beginning to something thats been running around my brain since last night.  So I thought I'd post it here, and see if you guys have any thoughts, comments, ideas, anything.......please!

And here we go.......

Its dark outside, and there’s a chill in the air as I hurry across the campus, coat pulled tight around me.  I run up

Comments

[altiloquent]

That's a very sharp image. I can definitely see it going somewhere.

[dracosangel]

Thanks. And I like the way its going so far, its just that I don't know where to go from here....hmmmmmm

[shunemo711]

Just wait for an inspiration, because it really does paint a clear picture. Lol it kind of reminds me of what I do around a guy at my school (but I'm not a creepy stalker...).

[dracosangel]

LOL. I hope it doesnt't sound like a creepy stalker, because I didn't want it to sound that way. I was hoping for 'admiring someone from afar'......