Just read this fic and it's really fun! I really enjoyed reading it and found myself agreeing with somebody so many times. (Mostly Sherlock, though. ... Whatever that says about me.) Characterisation is amazing, and I do love your OCs, they're lovely. Definitely looking forward to reading more! :)
This is really awesome; I love the premise because it's unique and I'm genuinely curious as to what will happen next. It's amusing. Your OCs are ... tolerable, which is far more than most. This is really amusing, too
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Describing the two of them as British is something that I don't really even think about when I'm writing. It's kind of like, "I need an adjective. British works," which I think is something a lot of people probably do. I'll freely admit that I really don't know a lot about England/Great Britain, so I don't really know the nuances about what people are called or what their accents are called. So, I really appreciate someone pointing out things like this to me. I can also see (and looking back at the chapter now, agree with) what you said about my mentioning John and Sherlock's nationalities much more than I mention the OCs nationalities.
Taking what you said into account, I went back and edited some of my descriptions of Sherlock and John so you can reread the chapter/future chapters and not want to run away screaming :) I have a number of massive pet peeves too, so I totally understand your frustration
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Thank you for understanding. I felt rather mean pointing it out (and looking back, I could have phrased it better. Sorry about that. It's been a long day) especially considering, aside from that, it is absolutely perfect.
Honestly, it's a brilliant fic and you should be proud of it. Forgot to mention it in my original comment, but the interaction between John and Sherlock is gorgeous - the affection and tenderness is simply amazing.
Again, thank you for taking what I said onboard. Fandom needs more lovely people like yourself.
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lol the rumors running around that school will be amazing!
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I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! :)
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or am i over stepping here? :)
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Feel free to give me suggestions and ideas for rumors! The more the merrier :D
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Sherlock's lack of patience and blunt deductions certainly don't bode too well for the high school students he's teaching, does it? lol
John and Sherlock are really big saps at heart <3
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Characterisation is amazing, and I do love your OCs, they're lovely. Definitely looking forward to reading more! :)
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I'm always worried about characterisation (with Sherlock, John, and the OCs) so it's good to hear that things are going well with that :D
More will be up as soon as I can!
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Describing the two of them as British is something that I don't really even think about when I'm writing. It's kind of like, "I need an adjective. British works," which I think is something a lot of people probably do. I'll freely admit that I really don't know a lot about England/Great Britain, so I don't really know the nuances about what people are called or what their accents are called. So, I really appreciate someone pointing out things like this to me. I can also see (and looking back at the chapter now, agree with) what you said about my mentioning John and Sherlock's nationalities much more than I mention the OCs nationalities.
Taking what you said into account, I went back and edited some of my descriptions of Sherlock and John so you can reread the chapter/future chapters and not want to run away screaming :) I have a number of massive pet peeves too, so I totally understand your frustration ( ... )
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Honestly, it's a brilliant fic and you should be proud of it. Forgot to mention it in my original comment, but the interaction between John and Sherlock is gorgeous - the affection and tenderness is simply amazing.
Again, thank you for taking what I said onboard. Fandom needs more lovely people like yourself.
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Thank you so much for your comments and suggestions though! I really appreciate them. I hope you continue reading once I can get the next part up :)
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