Serpent's wing 21

[draegyn]

Well and truly overdue I should think... I'm trying something different with the way this chapter is written. Let me know if you think it's easier to read. It's not really been betaed so be warned. As usual, any and all suggestions welcome.

Comments

[vpatrician]

Holy Toledo! Heero's been expelled. I am in shock over how much control Heero lost, damn.
On another note, I'm loving how Heero's deterioration caused Malfoy to actually speak 'politely' to the twins and vice versa.

[shabopo]

I confess to being stunned--I didn't see this coming at all. Stylistically it works; there's definitely a difference between this and previous chapters.

I'm still in shock. More useful commentary may occur after I get over my extreme disruption of mental speculation--*grin*.

[lordryous]

well, its been well over 24 hours but ive finally gotten to what would seem to be the current chapter

[rubysp]

Bloody brilliant!! I can't believe I missed this magnificent fic before. On GW side your portrayal of Heero and to a lesser extent Duo and Quatre are cannon-ly accurate

where are you?

[anonymous]

I have been wondering where you are cause you haven't updated in such a long time. Or even just posted something. I still check your live journal once a week for your stories Serpents Wing and Times Child. So please please update this year at least please.

Re: where are you?

[ranko66]

Its been almost a year and a half since you updated. Could you just give us your fans a hint that you do plan on finishing Serpent's Wing or you could just tell us whether your alive still. Or do you plan on giving up on fanfiction.