OP is so much in love with you right now. Truly, this is more than I even wished for. Lovely ending, too, open enough to imagine many ways this could possibly go... And our dear templar is the less awkward virgin I've ever seen, which is a little detail that I found delightful - the contrast between the usual dynamics of experienced!dom and sheltered!sub and this...
Thank you, thank you, thank you. Have a hundred internets, you won =D
Well, not really. I'm still very much into dom/sub, but I'm fine with whatever you think suits the story best, I think you have gotten a general idea of what I enjoy with this one fill, anyway.
I definitely left the ending open and there are different directions a followup could go. I'd be willing to try a sequel if you would give me details in the prompt as to what exactly you'd like in the story. I'd kind of like to see where this could go from here myself.
It might take me a bit to get it posted because I wrote this whole story while I've been on vacation this week and I have to go back to work. However, if you were willing to wait while I worked on it, I would be willing to write it.
You are most welcome. I'm glad you are thrilled. I should thank you for posting the very specific prompt as it gave me some wonderful ideas as the story developed. As I said this was my first try doing a fill here so I was nervous it wouldn't be what you wanted. I tried to work in all your points, but I decided to drop the pregnancy worry one. I had originally planned to put it in, but the story seemed to flow better without it.
As far as our *ahem* virgin Templar, I figure he's watched two of these punishments and I'm sure Greagoir gave him instruction before Amell came to the office. He knew what to do even though he had never experienced the actual acts himself. I thought it was an interesting twist having him be the dominant one. Glad you approve.
The story flows wonderfully indeed, don't worry about that! For a first fill, it was certainly amazing, it's exactly the kind of story I was asking for, and it had a number of very original details that made it even more worthwhile.
I don't mind waiting for the sequel, if that means I'll be able to read something as interesting as this was! So, do take your time, I'll be around keeping my eyes open ^^
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Thank you, thank you, thank you. Have a hundred internets, you won =D
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I'm so ready to post the request - but if it's not something either of you desire... ?
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Captcha says "calints touching." I don't know what calints are but it sounds dirty.
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why does "calints" immediately transfer into "taints" in my mind?
Perhaps captcha isn't the only dirty one in these parts...
BWY my captcha says "excliati sworn" and I'm certain it's dirty!
Mmmm... whatever could "ex"cliati mean?
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So, feel free to post a request! ^^
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I'll leave that to you, kind anon!writer =)
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It might take me a bit to get it posted because I wrote this whole story while I've been on vacation this week and I have to go back to work. However, if you were willing to wait while I worked on it, I would be willing to write it.
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As far as our *ahem* virgin Templar, I figure he's watched two of these punishments and I'm sure Greagoir gave him instruction before Amell came to the office. He knew what to do even though he had never experienced the actual acts himself. I thought it was an interesting twist having him be the dominant one. Glad you approve.
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I don't mind waiting for the sequel, if that means I'll be able to read something as interesting as this was! So, do take your time, I'll be around keeping my eyes open ^^
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