SECOND WORLD - can Warleader Yoh impregnate Hippy Fei Long? And what about Aki, Asami and Mik?
Anybody Fei & Yoh still out there? When the YA Career Prompt Festival 2013 came up in April there was a prompt I simply couldn't resist:
Prompt No. 14 by mistressdi
Pairing/Character(s): Feilong/Yoh
Scenario: Hippy Feilong is the first male to undergo surgery to restore the planet's population. Powerful war leader Yoh wins the bid to impregnate him, but has to win over the peace loving Feilong before the deed can be done. What will happen?
Additions: MPREG, male childbirth, Yoh changing diapers, amazing five day pregnancy.
Squicks: None. Go for it.
I did.
And since I always like it best when all the boys are together, there is lots of Akihito and Asami too. And of course a guest appearance of Misha. And Kirishima Kei.
Title: Second World - a Melodramatic Sci-Fi Male/Male+ Utopia in 7 chapters
Author: dragonchiclet
Beta: lizzy0308
Further Pairing/Character(s): Aki/Asami, Kirishima Kei, Mik and others (of which only a very small one was prompted)
Spoilers: Viewfinder 1 - 5, Finder no Rakuin
Disclaimers: Yamane Ayano owns all of the Viewfinder characters
Rating: G to NC-17 (see chapter headings)
First published in YA comm (5 postings between July 19 and August 1, 2013): I loved sunflower1343's inspired moderation - those intro's, for ALL of our contributions, are wonderful. Thank you! (And thank you for your out of this world stories. Even the one that is...difficult for me). Thank you mistressdi for your mindblowing prompt! I'd like to know how you came to think of it? Far out *g*. And lizzy0308: thank you soooo, so much for your creative (and marathon) beta job - and what patience you had with Yoh, Fei & me!!!
I was blown over by your comments in the original postings July 19 ff :skadalex, delwynmarch, krambi003, portisheart, autumnwheat, mistressdi, sunflower1343, eprime, lizzy0308, nbsiren, princessoftor, j04ann4, mtarashidango and kinslayers, thank you - it was extremely hard not to answer at once *_* I'm just beginning to do so. Master Prompt List for YA Career Fest, May 19, reveal on September 2
Read the chapters on my LJ: 1 First Impregnator, 2 Faith Switch Issues, 3 What Have I Done, 4 On Another Planet, 5 Flying This Bird Home, 6 Flower Power on the High Loft, 7 Only You
Major Yoh Influences
Fei Long influences I don't need, other than Sensei herself. Alas, this is my very own Fei. That is not to say I do not adore some other Fei´s, thegreymoon's in "Dire consequences" and sunflower1343's in "Therapy" are heartfelt and divine.
Major Yoh influences, like for my other story, continue to be eprime and randrews! Guys, both of your Yoh's just rock. But I want moooore ;-).
Fascinating (for me) "new" Yoh's directly influencing this story:
krambi003's Yoh as a wild wolf! Wild but caring, and responsible. Yesss. Hot. I guess my Yoh's trying to live up to those expectations. Thanks to the hippies' Earth Goddess he doesn't have to resort to measures like in " What Goes Around Comes Around" - but that Yoh ("enough is enough!") got me to take him Very. Serious. Indeed.
skadalex' drabble " Sexual" enticing glimpse on an enchantingly playful and mischievous lover/companion Yoh! Performing devious tests on his feral "victim" Fei *g*. Yes, very delicious respite from all that angst. Waiting for more ;-)
The third Yoh's by far the darkest and most twisted: delwynmarch's " Rise ch 1" and " Rise ch 3" introduce a fascinatingly messed up Mr. Undercover / Asami's man - *shiver*. Awesome @_@
krambi003's " Mother & Child" was my major inspirational fanart during the "writing of" (though I suspect Fei Long wouldn't manage THAT much mildness even if his "connection" shot him up as high as the moon with snuggling hormones). And, then, wow, " The Father" - handsome wild Elf-Lord Yoh *_*
The green cheongsam and beautiful peacock of immorta_beloved's " Alone and in Deep Thought" had an appearance in chapter 7 - sorry it was so brief and cracky^^. Your beautiful Fei's, the "plant language" in your art, and last but not least, almost naked Yoh...aaah.
The music & video clip by the pretty gay *g* Swedish pop group Army of Lovers - "Supernatural" helped me "get in the mood". And "The Flesh Failures / Let the Sunshine In" from the musical "Hair". Also "Wasn't Born to Follow" by the Byrds - mainly for Aki/Asami *runs away*. "Back To Black" by Amy Winehouse *cry* for canon Fei... "Diferente" by "Gotan Project" for Activists Aki&Fei in the cockpit, and on similar missions.
Main warning: mpreg! "male" childbirth! I Never thought I'd ever write such kink. But I fell instantly in love with "prompt, No 14", revealed as mistressdi's. I always had a thing for the "hippy" - era (nowadays more often spelled "hippie"), and what an excuse to give Yoh&Fei the time of their life - aaaarghhh!!! New to this as I am, it never occurred to me to not follow every whim of the prompt painstakingly ;-). Be warned - the description of the male+ childbirth in chapter 5 got very graphic.
Other warnings: A few explicit scenes (sorry no time for more): some Aki/Fei in chapter 2; more Fei/Yoh, Yoh/Fei in chapter 5. Fei has a traumatic flashback in chapter 3. Serious misuse of scientifical concepts and cultural backgrounds. Angst (Yoh/Fei), crack (Aki/Kirishima, Aki/Asami, others) and fluff (Fei/Tao). (I so wanted to give A/A a steamy one, too - but for that I would have needed an entire unbroken day, which I never had in that time. That I had so little time, on the other hand, was probably the very reason I got this "completed" - I knew I couldn't afford to procrastinate and snatched every moment!)
AN's: Obviously the boys all have to go OOC some. Fei Long: “peace loving” - hmmmm. Never, however, would this Fei Long willingly harm Akihito (featuring majorly as co-hippy-confidant) - at least not in any other way than by seriously getting on his nerves - or other - body parts. For the “amazing five day pregnancy” I have to admit I used a trick.
PS: In rereading my hippie-era sources I was aghast by how oppressively female clichéd those supposedly enlightened times were! Flower -"Power" only for the females pretty and docile by male standards? We've come a long, long way. Not there yet, but still.
This whole experience was pretty extreme. I wrote over 32 000 words in about 7 weeks, in my little bit of spare time. When reading over now, I feel I should blow up to 60 000 - or delete. I'll do neither, try not even to edit very much, and let go - crossposting a notice to by_your_hand, club_sion and fei_love. And hail_mik. Please have mercy if some of this sounds a bit rushed - it was! Concrit's always welcome ;-)
Prompt No. 14 by mistressdi
Pairing/Character(s): Feilong/Yoh
Scenario: Hippy Feilong is the first male to undergo surgery to restore the planet's population. Powerful war leader Yoh wins the bid to impregnate him, but has to win over the peace loving Feilong before the deed can be done. What will happen?
Additions: MPREG, male childbirth, Yoh changing diapers, amazing five day pregnancy.
Squicks: None. Go for it.
I did.
And since I always like it best when all the boys are together, there is lots of Akihito and Asami too. And of course a guest appearance of Misha. And Kirishima Kei.
Title: Second World - a Melodramatic Sci-Fi Male/Male+ Utopia in 7 chapters
Author: dragonchiclet
Beta: lizzy0308
Further Pairing/Character(s): Aki/Asami, Kirishima Kei, Mik and others (of which only a very small one was prompted)
Spoilers: Viewfinder 1 - 5, Finder no Rakuin
Disclaimers: Yamane Ayano owns all of the Viewfinder characters
Rating: G to NC-17 (see chapter headings)
First published in YA comm (5 postings between July 19 and August 1, 2013): I loved sunflower1343's inspired moderation - those intro's, for ALL of our contributions, are wonderful. Thank you! (And thank you for your out of this world stories. Even the one that is...difficult for me). Thank you mistressdi for your mindblowing prompt! I'd like to know how you came to think of it? Far out *g*. And lizzy0308: thank you soooo, so much for your creative (and marathon) beta job - and what patience you had with Yoh, Fei & me!!!
I was blown over by your comments in the original postings July 19 ff :skadalex, delwynmarch, krambi003, portisheart, autumnwheat, mistressdi, sunflower1343, eprime, lizzy0308, nbsiren, princessoftor, j04ann4, mtarashidango and kinslayers, thank you - it was extremely hard not to answer at once *_* I'm just beginning to do so. Master Prompt List for YA Career Fest, May 19, reveal on September 2
Read the chapters on my LJ: 1 First Impregnator, 2 Faith Switch Issues, 3 What Have I Done, 4 On Another Planet, 5 Flying This Bird Home, 6 Flower Power on the High Loft, 7 Only You
Major Yoh Influences
Fei Long influences I don't need, other than Sensei herself. Alas, this is my very own Fei. That is not to say I do not adore some other Fei´s, thegreymoon's in "Dire consequences" and sunflower1343's in "Therapy" are heartfelt and divine.
Major Yoh influences, like for my other story, continue to be eprime and randrews! Guys, both of your Yoh's just rock. But I want moooore ;-).
Fascinating (for me) "new" Yoh's directly influencing this story:
krambi003's Yoh as a wild wolf! Wild but caring, and responsible. Yesss. Hot. I guess my Yoh's trying to live up to those expectations. Thanks to the hippies' Earth Goddess he doesn't have to resort to measures like in " What Goes Around Comes Around" - but that Yoh ("enough is enough!") got me to take him Very. Serious. Indeed.
skadalex' drabble " Sexual" enticing glimpse on an enchantingly playful and mischievous lover/companion Yoh! Performing devious tests on his feral "victim" Fei *g*. Yes, very delicious respite from all that angst. Waiting for more ;-)
The third Yoh's by far the darkest and most twisted: delwynmarch's " Rise ch 1" and " Rise ch 3" introduce a fascinatingly messed up Mr. Undercover / Asami's man - *shiver*. Awesome @_@
krambi003's " Mother & Child" was my major inspirational fanart during the "writing of" (though I suspect Fei Long wouldn't manage THAT much mildness even if his "connection" shot him up as high as the moon with snuggling hormones). And, then, wow, " The Father" - handsome wild Elf-Lord Yoh *_*
The green cheongsam and beautiful peacock of immorta_beloved's " Alone and in Deep Thought" had an appearance in chapter 7 - sorry it was so brief and cracky^^. Your beautiful Fei's, the "plant language" in your art, and last but not least, almost naked Yoh...aaah.
The music & video clip by the pretty gay *g* Swedish pop group Army of Lovers - "Supernatural" helped me "get in the mood". And "The Flesh Failures / Let the Sunshine In" from the musical "Hair". Also "Wasn't Born to Follow" by the Byrds - mainly for Aki/Asami *runs away*. "Back To Black" by Amy Winehouse *cry* for canon Fei... "Diferente" by "Gotan Project" for Activists Aki&Fei in the cockpit, and on similar missions.
Main warning: mpreg! "male" childbirth! I Never thought I'd ever write such kink. But I fell instantly in love with "prompt, No 14", revealed as mistressdi's. I always had a thing for the "hippy" - era (nowadays more often spelled "hippie"), and what an excuse to give Yoh&Fei the time of their life - aaaarghhh!!! New to this as I am, it never occurred to me to not follow every whim of the prompt painstakingly ;-). Be warned - the description of the male+ childbirth in chapter 5 got very graphic.
Other warnings: A few explicit scenes (sorry no time for more): some Aki/Fei in chapter 2; more Fei/Yoh, Yoh/Fei in chapter 5. Fei has a traumatic flashback in chapter 3. Serious misuse of scientifical concepts and cultural backgrounds. Angst (Yoh/Fei), crack (Aki/Kirishima, Aki/Asami, others) and fluff (Fei/Tao). (I so wanted to give A/A a steamy one, too - but for that I would have needed an entire unbroken day, which I never had in that time. That I had so little time, on the other hand, was probably the very reason I got this "completed" - I knew I couldn't afford to procrastinate and snatched every moment!)
AN's: Obviously the boys all have to go OOC some. Fei Long: “peace loving” - hmmmm. Never, however, would this Fei Long willingly harm Akihito (featuring majorly as co-hippy-confidant) - at least not in any other way than by seriously getting on his nerves - or other - body parts. For the “amazing five day pregnancy” I have to admit I used a trick.
PS: In rereading my hippie-era sources I was aghast by how oppressively female clichéd those supposedly enlightened times were! Flower -"Power" only for the females pretty and docile by male standards? We've come a long, long way. Not there yet, but still.
This whole experience was pretty extreme. I wrote over 32 000 words in about 7 weeks, in my little bit of spare time. When reading over now, I feel I should blow up to 60 000 - or delete. I'll do neither, try not even to edit very much, and let go - crossposting a notice to by_your_hand, club_sion and fei_love. And hail_mik. Please have mercy if some of this sounds a bit rushed - it was! Concrit's always welcome ;-)