For the last four days I have been editing Faith, taking away most of the paragraphs of DOOM, the omfg adverbs and whatnot. It's posted up at my writing journal, which is jezebel_rising and I'll also be linking everything here.
And, since rereading Faith, in detail for the first time in a looong time, I was really mean to them, wasn't I? Muwhahahaha...
So. Here it is. I'll be tagging this in my memories for easy reference.