Future

[dragonkitiara]

I one saw a father and his daughter standing by the tracks of an old railway. His coat was brown, patched,and rough. Hers, a bright vibrant red. Her hair blew in blonde ringlets about her cheeks, rosy with the chill air. The stubble on his chin was steel grey, emphasizing his tired blue eyes

Comments

[daffydoll]

Hello adjectives! So vivid and descriptive.

Beautifully written tragic little moment. Draws the reader in... and bam.

[dragonkitiara]

:D YAY!!

[dragonkitiara]

ps. adjectives are fun ^^