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[dragonlady2000]

Sora the Mage: Plotline More Refined

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You as being the main writer now, can do anything you please with plot that you think will make it better. Or be easier for you in the ling run. Espeshaly on dialog, when it comes to the people saying meaningful things, I get too m ushy and cliché sometimes. SO don’t feel bad about

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[oblivium]

It was a pain to read... but I loved it XD There's room for a lot of possibilities, and the basic idea is definitely interesting. That's my kind of story! I try to keep the characters as IC as possible even in AU fics, so when Sora's being given away as a gift, he won't go without a little fight ;]

LOL @ Liaf Cipé. I might change the name if you don't mind ;P

Thanks so much for sharing this. And you can definitely be my beta! I'll most likely come to you when I want to change things, or add stuff, etc. I'll start making my own notes, but I'll wait for the entire plot to start writing.

[dragonlady2000]

Like I said, things can always be changed, and or improved. I have no qualms with changes. This fic originally was just a fic where Sepharoth stole Sora and gave him to his son Riku and a gift. But that died with a fiery passion before it got past my brain. And When I get the rest to you, Id love to hear your ideas. And hopefully more things will become more clear

[dragonlady2000]

I type too mutch -.-; *sigh*

[oblivium]

rofl no it's fine. Can't wait for the next part! I'll come to you with ideas and such when I actually start writing it.

Besides, I love details, and I wanna be sure I get exactly what you had in mind so don't worry about over explaining anything.