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[dragons_wyrd]

Ok, I've come out with a character bio for the main protagonist female in my story. Please feel free to say anything, I've been working on her for quite a while, and she's had such a change. I mean, it was a complete character and world overhaul. I want my story to be unique, and be warned, it isn't epic, but it's a long, and well thought out stat

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[unfinishedscore]

I promise I'll read it but it'd be easier to read if the font and coloring weren't so obnoxious. Also, the font coloring for typing in comments -- hot-green? C'mon now. My eyes are bleeding! ;_;

And she should have a +9 sword against ogres.

...and a bag of cheetos. Just cause.

[opened_eyes]

It's why I use my friends page to interact with all of my Jenn-Jenn's livejournal posts ^_^.

*ducks* I love you honey!

[dragons_wyrd]

ok, ok, I give. I changed it. Hmph. XD

[magictoenail]

I read over the high points. Looks pretty cool. How will you explain the backstory/history of your world? In exposition? Or in a seperate book like the Silmarillion?

Also, what's the religion here? You keep mentioning God and the devil; is it based on Christianity?

[dragons_wyrd]

yeah, in a half-assed attempted way to explain my view on religion ^-^