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mekina July 3 2012, 01:07:31 UTC
I knew it was that blue vase as soon as Castiel mentioned a jar. Otherwise it wouldn't have been pointed out, eh?

because we need to talk him

You're missing a to in there, by the way!

It was disturbing enough to know that he’d been feeling up an angel when he’d thought that he’d been making out with his brother.

Ah, that very sentence is just messed up. Which is worse, feeling up an angel, or making out with your brother? *snicker*

In two short strides, he was kneeling on top of Sam’s bed and checking for a pulse.

I love how his first instinct, in fic and canon, is to make sure Sam's okay!

The soft parts would go first. They always went first.

Oh. Oh God. That's so horrible. Dean! ;_; Such a non graphic sentence, but the images it paints in your head. JFC, poor Dean. I don't even like thinking about what he must have gone through, but with just one sentence I ended up imagining it anyway. (Er, well, two sentences. But still, that's talent.)

“…Like a supernatural roach motel.”Classy, Dean. Very classy. Why does Sam put up ( ... )

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dragonspell January 1 2013, 01:34:23 UTC
Hee! Right. XD It's hard trying to leave breadcrumbs without making it obvious.

I love Dean's need to check on Sam, too. I really wanted to put that in this fic.

Thank you again!

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