Comments | dragonspell: Fic: RPS (Jared/Jensen): The Lion at Starfall [2/2] | NC-17

dragonspell

Fic: RPS (Jared/Jensen): The Lion at Starfall [2/2] | NC-17 | 11760

Dec 25, 2014 23:43

Comments 22

nice_demon December 29 2014, 19:09:46 UTC

I'm in love with this fic!

I'd loved to read more in this world...

dragonspell January 3 2015, 13:55:54 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad that you liked it.

I might add more. I do have a few things that didn't make it that I might revise it for or add a timestamp.

jimbobjoe December 30 2014, 23:30:47 UTC

Wow, this story is begging for art! I love your descriptions of Jensen's armor and skills. He sounds positively awesome!

dragonspell January 3 2015, 13:56:51 UTC

Gah. I kind of fell in love with Jensen a little bit. =) I probably could have easily turned this story into a big bang, but didn't have the time.

I'm glad that you liked it!

aerynsun5 January 28 2015, 04:03:03 UTC

So great! I loved how persistent Jared was; how could Jensen not eventually fall for him. I also loved how Jensen slapped him on the ass with his sword. Too funny.

cleflink March 28 2015, 03:23:36 UTC

Oh wow, I absolutely adored this world. The details were amazing and I could happily read all about this world with its Dancers and rituals and world renowned marketplaces. Fascinating!

It's also really nice to see a story about treaty-marriages where things actually work out well for everyone involved, despite Jensen's initial misgivings. Jared's measured, careful courtship was sweet, and I love that he gave Jensen his sword back in such a way that it was a gift and a promise rather than something that Jensen might see as pity.

bostonpig123 December 25 2015, 01:51:06 UTC

Great story -- I could visualize Jensen and Jared's sword training sessions. So hot! Thank you for sharing.