[fic/Art] Communique Chapter 14

Apr 19, 2011 16:17

Title: Communiqué
Authors: cassiopeia13 & dragonsquill
Fandom: Star Trek: AOS
Pairing: Kirk/McCoy, Sulu/Chekov, Scotty/Female ST Character
Rating: R
Warnings: Intense Graphical Story, Humor, crack, MPreg
Summary: A year after the Enterprise left space dock, on it's first five year mission, the Captain, Lt. Sulu, Commander Scott and a poor security ensign find themselves ( Read more... )

epistle, fanfiction, star trek

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laeliacatt April 20 2011, 02:44:42 UTC
BBQ and pecan pie? Pike never stood a chance against Ella Mae's tactics of persuasion. :D

Oh, the baby is here!! Poor Jim. I'll bet he claims the whole thing lasted hours. Days, even! Loved Spock's log, telling of the event and how he wanted to meditate on his mother's memory. Bless.

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cassiopeia13 April 20 2011, 02:56:11 UTC
All I had was Rebecca's write up of Ella Mae sending a message to Pike, I had no idea if she wanted pulled pork, or ribs or just a bottle of sauce. So when she came on IM I asked (after I'd made the graphic) and she said "ribs"... I find it moderately scary that we share a brain cell...

Since the beginning I always wanted to have Jim give birth 2 months early in a cave. You know... Jim always has to do things in the dramatic. I'm very glad the Spock POV worked so well! Rebecca did a brilliant job!

Thanks for reading ^_^

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wolf_naked April 20 2011, 19:07:26 UTC
Poor Jim, never can do things the easy way. Glad to see Ella Mae charming Pike. And Spock figuring out that, even given the disaster, the Vulcan way is not always the best way.
Chekov worrying about Sulu's health... It's all very sweet.
Lovely as always.

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dragonsquill April 20 2011, 19:21:38 UTC
*scrapes sugar from post*

And now...more children! 0_~

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:-) mistress_fatale April 22 2011, 23:45:34 UTC
I love this story I just read everything you've done so far straight through. The characters are great and the format is really fun to read. I love the little touches like pictures on the desk beside the consoles. I hope to see many future chapters! Keep up the good work.

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Re: :-) cassiopeia13 April 23 2011, 02:16:27 UTC
Thanks so much! We're actually hard at work on the next chapter so fear not.

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browngirl April 24 2011, 17:58:45 UTC
So I was whooping and cheering and laughing, and then I got to the Dramatic Birth Scene (because of course Jim would give birth in a cave after sneaking planetside) and Spoock's account made me CRY.

Well done, miladies, well done.

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dragonsquill April 24 2011, 22:35:02 UTC
Thanks so much! Spock's p.o.v. was a bit of a bear to write, so I'm pleased it worked for you.

And thank you for commenting! It makes our day! <3!!!

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hermya June 23 2011, 18:21:50 UTC
Wow just wow, this series has been given an added sense of realism with the use of the graphics. I lOve it, well done!!

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cassiopeia13 June 23 2011, 18:26:45 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying! We just finished chapter 19 and are hard at work at chapter 20! Anything you'd like to see more of?

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